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Three goofballs in spooky display, One with hat, other's fangs on play! With faces askew, They jump out and boo, Scaring laughs than fear on the way!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 10/26/2024 12:15:00 PM
You've captured the youth's goofy showings, Jay. Best for the contest!
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Date: 10/18/2024 9:19:00 PM
Beautiful image and excellent illustration !
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Date: 10/16/2024 7:40:00 PM
Excellent limerick meter.
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Date: 10/16/2024 2:02:00 PM
Hello Jay, You limerick brought a smile to my face. Good luck in the contest. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/15/2024 9:44:00 PM
I was once such a kid, too. A Great write, Jay. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 10/15/2024 7:53:00 PM
This is a scene from my childhood. It sure was fun. I like your limerick.
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Date: 10/15/2024 3:26:00 PM
Hello Jay, this time of the year the children have fun, going door to door. collecting candy along the way. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
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Date: 10/15/2024 1:54:00 PM
Oh what fun those kids have on Halloween day, gl in the contest dear Jay
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Date: 10/15/2024 1:05:00 PM
What a fun Limerick write. "Good Luck" We both did this one... Have a fun Autumn day writing away...................
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