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Halloween spoof

Three goofballs in spooky display,
One with hat, other's fangs on play!
With faces askew,
They jump out and boo,
Scaring  laughs than fear on the way!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Anaya Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 12:15 PM
You've captured the youth's goofy showings, Jay. Best for the contest!
George Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 9:19 PM
Beautiful image and excellent illustration !
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 7:40 PM
Excellent limerick meter.
Rodgers Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 2:02 PM
Hello Jay, You limerick brought a smile to my face. Good luck in the contest. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Gifford Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 9:44 PM
I was once such a kid, too. A Great write, Jay. Have a wonderful day.
Greenhough Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 7:53 PM
This is a scene from my childhood. It sure was fun. I like your limerick.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 3:26 PM
Hello Jay, this time of the year the children have fun, going door to door. collecting candy along the way. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
Rose  Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 1:54 PM
Oh what fun those kids have on Halloween day, gl in the contest dear Jay
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 1:05 PM
What a fun Limerick write. "Good Luck" We both did this one... Have a fun Autumn day writing away...................
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