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Halloween Night Ii - Re-Write

Halloween Night II I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue; they set their sights on Halloween night. It's then, they'll sample the witches brew. Inside the circle's, a different view; some will think it's a beautiful sight. I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue. Flowers in our hair, and eyes so blue; gold on our wrists will shine in the light. It's then, they'll sample the witches brew. Scarves on our hips and toes painted, too; we'll be dancing around the firelight. I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue. Jasmine in the air sets minds askew, as they step into the light, so white. It's then, they'll sample the witches brew. Our skin is covered with morning dew, we'll take them, then, to a frenzied height. I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue, it's then, they'll sample the witches brew. By: Catie LIndsey ************************************************* Halloween Night II- RE-Write Wizards and warlocks have no notion As witches begin brewing on Halloween night Soon they'll taste the witches potion Inside the cauldron of their emotions Many succumb to vampire bites Wizards and warlocks have no notion Bat eating Zombies spring into motion as the winged creature fly into the light Soon they'll taste the witches potion Ghouls and goblins start a commotion as we dance around the fire bright Wizards and warlocks have no notion Witches add jasmine to their magic concoction As wizards and warlocks come into sight Soon they'll taste the witches potion As moonlight glimmers upon the ocean We'll give them all a bit of a fright Wizards and warlocks have no notion Soon they'll taste the witches potion By: Joseph May contest name: Re-write one of my poems sponsor: Catie Lindsey

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Date: 10/23/2012 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Re-Write" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:50:00 AM
An excellent write Joseph, congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 10/21/2012 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations friend Joseph on your win..hugs!!
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Date: 10/20/2012 9:25:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations with your win...pd
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Date: 10/20/2012 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Joseph May! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/20/2012 12:59:00 PM
Congrats Joseph..One love, Joy Wells
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Joseph May
Date: 10/20/2012 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Joy
Date: 10/20/2012 12:37:00 PM
congrats JOSEPH ON WINNING AN HM FOR YOUR AMAZING RE-WRITE OF CATIE'S POEM LUV .. CONGRATS ..
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Joseph May
Date: 10/20/2012 5:41:00 PM
thank you Linda
Date: 10/9/2012 12:45:00 PM
Splendid rewrite... you made everything fit so well! Terry (good luck in the contest)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/9/2012 3:37:00 PM
thank you so much Terry
Date: 10/8/2012 2:21:00 PM
how cute, the way you changed the main words brew and clue for potion and notion. WEll done!!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2012 4:40:00 PM
thank you so much Andrea

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