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Halloween Night

Come with us Halloweening. We’ll frolic in the streets. We’ll race from house to house to house Spouting “Trick-or-Treats.” And eagerly we’ll each collect Confections in a bag. Fellow ghouls, we’ll abandon you If you even start to lag! No slackers in OUR party As we dash from door to door. Unlit locations far removed Instinctively we ignore. Our goal: to get all we can hold This wickedly winsome night, This “Hallowed Eve” of children’s dreams For fancy and delight. A time that kids’ imaginings Collectively take flight In form of costumes of all kinds- Of whimsy and of fright. For Dale and I, that’s part of the fun, But even better yet Is what we’ve counted the days off FOR- The bounty we’re going to get! And through the dark we onward dart. Watch as we trespass People’s lawns, but yards with dogs We cleverly bypass. And when we need to go back home To get more paper sacks, We drop off treats we’ve got so far, Then quickly double back. . . Until we’ve covered every block Of every foreknown spot That we had ever frequented And some that we had not! Then good and late we homeward speed With just a little dread, For darkened windows greet us And most folks have gone to bed. We throw our candies on the floor, So much there is to eat! We count each chewy chocolate bar, Each popcorn ball and sweet. We toss out raisins, apples, Tiny suckers, silly fruit, Or give them to our siblings Who received too little loot. Then off to bed, our day complete, We dream of how we’ll feast Each day with glee, while savoring Our treasury of treats. For the Halloween Night Poetry Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 10/31/2016 2:53:00 AM
Congrats on your high placement Andrea. This was one of my favorites. It is beautifully written with depth of feeling. : ) 7
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Date: 10/22/2016 12:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win. What a fun Halloween!
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Date: 10/21/2016 4:08:00 PM
Awesome poem & Win! :) Fun stuff!
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Date: 10/21/2016 11:03:00 AM
happy hallowwen and happy ciongrats, my andie... sweet poem; huggs
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Date: 10/20/2016 9:32:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win love your poem! Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 10/20/2016 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 10/20/2016 3:39:00 PM
very cute Andrea, nice feeling for Halloween. To me it's creepy, you make it sound so sweet and fun as it should be. congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 11/2/2015 8:51:00 AM
Andrea, Such a familiar site! Great poem describing the trick or treat ritual perfectly from my teenages perspective! Congrats on the win! ~Jan
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Date: 11/1/2015 5:15:00 PM
You captured all the glory and imagery of a kid's Halloween night, Andrea! Congrats on your well-deserved First Place win! 7,Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:52:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your Halloween win in Kelly's contest. SKAT
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Date: 10/31/2015 9:15:00 AM
Andrea....you have truly captured the aura of Halloween's magical mystery. We always told the other kids if someone was dropping "APPLES" in the bag.....congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/31/2015 7:58:00 AM
Andrea, you caputured the spirit of Halloween with this piece. Congratulations on your top win it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 10/31/2015 2:53:00 AM
Excellent Andrea! Your poem exudes the joy everyone feels on this holiday that is not just for the kids. Your poem is so deserving of first place. Please post at PFT. #7
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Date: 10/30/2015 11:32:00 PM
Congratulations! Great poem. ~ Susan
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Date: 10/30/2015 3:38:00 PM
Great poem Andrea. I missed out on Halloween when I was young enough to enjoy it. But in my elder years my grandkids have come trick or treating to my door. Congratulations o your no. 1
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Date: 10/30/2015 1:46:00 PM
many congrats on your top spot - a great halloween write - it wasn't something much we celebrated when I was a kid - see it is so much more commercial in the UK nowadays:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2015 1:29:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win Andrea on a write that took me back to my childhood. I remember everything you wrote about I did as well, are we the same age...? I think not... Great write~ Caryl
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Date: 10/30/2015 12:40:00 PM
An excellent poem that brought back those fun memories of Halloween... I enjoyed your poem very much, Andrea! Congratulations on a first place win!
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Date: 10/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
Andrea.. congratulations on your win. Always & Forever =Linda=
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Date: 10/12/2013 11:22:00 AM
Andrea,, thanks for the Halloween entry.... SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2010 8:58:00 AM
thankxx Andrea.. have yet to write my Halloween contribution today .. still thinking on it.. appreciate your uplifting comments today with luv..
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Date: 10/21/2010 6:26:00 PM
Superb! You have caught the flavor and the moment. This is what Halloween used to be and mean before all of this Samhein crap and all of the evil and the perverts destroyed it. God, how that makes me angry! Good job as usual. ! Regards and thank you! Gerard.
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:01:00 PM
Reading this made me smile and realize how much I love Halloween! Very well written :) -Echo
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:26:00 PM
i love this poem,especially when we get to the treasury of treats,lovely poem Andrea!Celene.
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