Halloween Hangover

Unsettling it was
came from where
I did not know,
the jagged claw upon 
my chamber floor

so near the cot
where I nightly lay,
have dreamed so snug
feeling quite secure,

sharpest at the edges

capable of tearing flesh
and bone, my innards
deep

how could this hideous
thing unbeknownst stealthily 
creep -- 

perhaps always near
I shuddered to think

somewhere attached to
my spirit long ago -- a
thought too repugnant 
I did not want to hear it

from my troubled mind
hastened I to clear it

hungrily latched-on to my
soul, I prayed desperately
to be free of it

confronting my 
original abomination --
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 1/22/2025 10:12:00 PM
glad you were able to free yourself through prayer Joe of that abomination. God bless you my friend and protect you from evil...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/25/2025 2:07:00 PM
I need all the blessings and protection I can get:) Thank you, Mike. I never take put in my mind that I have arrived a any level of enlightenment...always striving.
Date: 1/21/2025 1:16:00 PM
ooohhhh, so creepy. good Halloweenish poem!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/21/2025 2:05:00 PM
Hi Andrea; thank you. Have great day my friend.
Date: 1/19/2025 2:20:00 AM
- Open the window... release the beast into the night, Joe :) - Great written :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/19/2025 7:25:00 AM
Or if unable at night, wait till the morning...trusting in beams of light:) Thank you, Anne. We are a complex species.
Date: 1/19/2025 2:14:00 AM
A well=composed Halloween poem. Hope this is fiction. Don't dwell on scary things, though I have some scary poems up my sleeve.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/19/2025 7:26:00 AM
Prestidigitation of the Soul! Give it a go, Victor; what the heck. Light is the best purification. Thank you, my friend.
Date: 1/19/2025 12:32:00 AM
Scary scenes leave scary feelings and memories in our mind. Perhaps, this is the after effect of a scary scene you witnessed on a Halloween night sometime in your childhood. It is surprising how our mind acts at times. Dear Joe, hope you'll be able to drive out that wretch coming to threaten you. Well composed.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/19/2025 7:30:00 AM
Catholics would call it, Original Sin. Something lurking, lingering in all humanity, best to look at, and finally discard. I don't know? Maybe just a poem. Thank you, Valsa.
Date: 1/18/2025 3:47:00 PM
I pray you succeeded on keeping it away whatever it was that was clinging to you on Halloween night, eek , Valentine is coming close, think of hearts and love J, you and I should write one together some day, :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/18/2025 6:17:00 PM
Hi Vie; just wrote one, but I could not keep it serious. Getting old I guess. Will publish it in a couple of weeks, closer to Valentine's day. Maybe give a few a laugh. Have a great weekend my friend.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/18/2025 3:54:00 PM
Oh wow! Such a wonderful idea. Let me know how we can do that. I would be honored. Thank you.
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