Halloween Fairytale

Across the sky ghostly ashen clouds sail
whilst the dark night tells a tale;
for the world grows cold and very stale,
and the moon wears a dark veil.

October thirty-first, leaves a trail
for All Hallows Eve that never does fail
to make pompous spirits turn pale.

The darkness unleashes a banshee wail,
as all the unearthly creatures trail
of the beaten earth shale.
Their mouth shriek and flail
about searching around the vale.

Witches pass their flask of witch hazel ale;
a special brew they've mixed in a pail,
as they inhale a magical spell and exhale
the roving lethal cocktail.

Jasper, their black cat sits on its tail,
thoughts of wickedness did assail 
as it hunger to feast on a blind quail.

The timid garden mouse runs into the deep dale
and hides; he has his own story to tale.

Don't be afraid and tears drop down like hail.
Mummy is here with her own fairy-tale.


10/26/2021

Halloween Monorhyme Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 11/12/2021 8:34:00 AM
A very spooky tale, especially the witch hazel ale :) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/10/2021 9:04:00 AM
Wonderfully spooky flowing with amazing vibrant images Eve - "pompous spirits turn pale!" Your poem is just filled with poetic expressions such as this. Congratulations on your first place win. Sending you many blessings my friend!
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Date: 11/9/2021 8:04:00 PM
WOW! EXCELLENT BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. LOVE.
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your "Halloween Fairytale" win. A fun story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/9/2021 9:42:00 AM
A beautiful monorhyme on the theme. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/9/2021 9:37:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your top win in Caren's contest. Exceptionally well done!
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Date: 11/2/2021 9:34:00 AM
Delightful while gently scary, Eve, and a technically crafted wonder. I especially liked your aligning a n accurate description of our current world with Halloween. Bravo
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Date: 11/2/2021 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Sally, for the wonderful compliment... Hugs Eve
Date: 10/29/2021 3:14:00 PM
Wonderful tale and monorhyme Eve. I especially loved the last two lines. Good luck in the contest. Emilia : )
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Date: 11/2/2021 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, Emilia, for the compliment and the good luck. ... Hugs Eve
Date: 10/28/2021 2:02:00 PM
wow, this is VERY good, Eve. One of my favorites of monorhymes I've been seeing for Halloween.
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Date: 11/2/2021 11:47:00 AM
Thank you,Andrea, you are always inspiring ... Hugs Eve
Date: 10/26/2021 6:11:00 PM
This fairy tale hits the head of the proverbial nail, Eve! ~ Story-lover
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Date: 11/2/2021 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon, do try.. Caren is hard to please... Hugs Eve
Date: 10/26/2021 10:43:00 AM
Hi Eve, a superb write, i think one has to experience Halloween night in America to totally appreciate, understand and enjoy it, for it seems this annual ritual though scary, is loads of fun Hugs and blessings. Jennifer
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Date: 11/2/2021 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Jen, you are always one of my best inspires ... Hugs Eve
Date: 10/26/2021 7:12:00 AM
Should do very well in contest Eve, hope so it is so good.
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Harry... Hugs my friend
Date: 10/26/2021 6:23:00 AM
Splendidly spun fairytale, Eve, and well executed in mono-rhymes. Win BIG!
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay... Hugs my friend
Date: 10/26/2021 5:37:00 AM
what a fabulous spooky story and great monorhyme Eve:) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Jam... Hugs my friend
Date: 10/26/2021 4:03:00 AM
Ah, I love the monorhyme scary to boot, gl in the contest Eve.
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, my friend... Hugs
Date: 10/26/2021 1:59:00 AM
Great Monorhyme. So many words that rhyme plus a delightful tale. Hugs.
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, Victor... Hugs my friend
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