Halloween Fairytale

Across the sky ghostly ashen clouds sail
whilst the dark night tells a tale;
for the world grows cold and very stale,
and the moon wears a dark veil.

October thirty-first, leaves a trail
for All Hallows Eve that never does fail
to make pompous spirits turn pale.

The darkness unleashes a banshee wail,
as all the unearthly creatures trail
of the beaten earth shale.
Their mouth shriek and flail
about searching around the vale.

Witches pass their flask of witch hazel ale;
a special brew they've mixed in a pail,
as they inhale a magical spell and exhale
the roving lethal cocktail.

Jasper, their black cat sits on its tail,
thoughts of wickedness did assail 
as it hunger to feast on a blind quail.

The timid garden mouse runs into the deep dale
and hides; he has his own story to tale.

Don't be afraid and tears drop down like hail.
Mummy is here with her own fairy-tale.


10/26/2021

Halloween Monorhyme Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Peck Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 8:34 AM
A very spooky tale, especially the witch hazel ale :) Congratulations on your win!
Kauffman Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Wonderfully spooky flowing with amazing vibrant images Eve - "pompous spirits turn pale!" Your poem is just filled with poetic expressions such as this. Congratulations on your first place win. Sending you many blessings my friend!
Dutta Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 8:04 PM
WOW! EXCELLENT BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. LOVE.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your "Halloween Fairytale" win. A fun story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Alex Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:42 AM
A beautiful monorhyme on the theme. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Eve, congratulations on your top win in Caren's contest. Exceptionally well done!
Eslinger Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Delightful while gently scary, Eve, and a technically crafted wonder. I especially liked your aligning a n accurate description of our current world with Halloween. Bravo
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Thank you, Sally, for the wonderful compliment... Hugs Eve
James Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Wonderful tale and monorhyme Eve. I especially loved the last two lines. Good luck in the contest. Emilia : )
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Thank you, Emilia, for the compliment and the good luck. ... Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 2:02 PM
wow, this is VERY good, Eve. One of my favorites of monorhymes I've been seeing for Halloween.
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Thank you,Andrea, you are always inspiring ... Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:11 PM
This fairy tale hits the head of the proverbial nail, Eve! ~ Story-lover
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Gershon, do try.. Caren is hard to please... Hugs Eve
Proxenos Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Hi Eve, a superb write, i think one has to experience Halloween night in America to totally appreciate, understand and enjoy it, for it seems this annual ritual though scary, is loads of fun Hugs and blessings. Jennifer
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Jen, you are always one of my best inspires ... Hugs Eve
Horsman Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Should do very well in contest Eve, hope so it is so good.
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Harry... Hugs my friend
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Splendidly spun fairytale, Eve, and well executed in mono-rhymes. Win BIG!
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Vijay... Hugs my friend
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 5:37 AM
what a fabulous spooky story and great monorhyme Eve:) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Jam... Hugs my friend
Rose  Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 4:03 AM
Ah, I love the monorhyme scary to boot, gl in the contest Eve.
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, my friend... Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 1:59 AM
Great Monorhyme. So many words that rhyme plus a delightful tale. Hugs.
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Victor... Hugs my friend
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