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Halloween

Hallowed evening is deafeningly here Goblins and witches loud shrieks are near Shelled corn raining down our outer wall Our whimpering dog is cringing in the hall Some snotty-nosed kid bangs on the door A plastic pumpkin for candy wants even more The tiny young princess calls out trick or treat A four-year-old drummer boy never misses a beat That big-footed clown lives up our lane The kid with the rattle is driving me insane An older woman whom I cannot figure out Is collecting for UNICEF, somehow, I doubt One more creature from the black lagoon Or a big, black hairy animal like a baboon I will take in my candy and drop out of sight Turn off the porch lamp and call it a night FIRST PLACE GOLD MEDAL WINNER "Brevity - Halloween" Poetry Contest All Poetry - October 9, 2021 FEATURED POETRY SOUP POEM June 20, 2021 FRONT PAGE PICK All Poetry October 5, 2022

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Date: 5/25/2022 5:59:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here. Your poem brings back childhood memories O' plenty BUT if anything it makes me realize that this Happy Holiday is NO longer celebrated the same carefree way of years gone by. Children have no concept of what fun ONCE WAS or WAS ONCE. It'll deafeningly NEVER be the same. Thank you for your poem...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/25/2022 6:17:00 PM
Well, you are so welcome, Jeff, and thank you for the very thoughtful comment on it. I appreciate it.
Date: 10/24/2020 5:31:00 AM
Yes ...like a microcosm of the real world the opportunist comes knocking. I turned my porch light off long ago. LOL Another wonderful poem. SuZ
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/26/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thanks, SuZ. Maybe I'll take that lesson from you!

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