Halloween-Shadow

Clouds drift slowly like soft tissues across the lonely cold face of the crying moon, absorbing its golden tears and leaving the night painted in ebon darkness. Darker still on Halloween, the ethereal shadows seem to solidify and come to life taking labored breaths, pulsing and writhing, in the changing lamp light's starkness. He is the shadow, ancient as the contorted limbs on the twisted leafless trees that cast grotesque shadow puppet silhouettes against the canvas of the sky. Need palpitating, he remains melted in the corner of the cemetery behind the church's old bell tower. How long he has been here he can not remember, sitting and waiting, always waiting. He hungers for emotion and savors each delectable morsel, anger and hate has a delicious taste, so creamy like freshly churned butter, but lust is his desire, his deepest craving and what he waits for this night, as he licks from his gnarled hands the sticky remnants of blood and doomed soul of his latest victim as he lay in the filth of the street raving. Remaining hidden in his favorite haunt, the alley by the graveyard where few people pass, only the most deviant come, muggers, murderers and ladies of the night, the ultimate chocolates. The dulcet sound of epicene heels echo on the pavement near him, the beautiful vamp her prey in tow, unaware she's on tonight's menu, moves into the shadows... as he waits.
10/05/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/1/2015 11:10:00 PM
Yet another lovely win James! Big congrats!
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James Inman
Date: 11/2/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Sharma.
Date: 11/1/2015 5:06:00 PM
there you go again with another win. Congratulations!
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James Inman
Date: 11/2/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 11/1/2015 11:03:00 AM
James, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
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James Inman
Date: 11/1/2015 12:07:00 PM
Thank you for always being there, SKAT.
Date: 11/1/2015 8:04:00 AM
Great story telling, congrats on your win.
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James Inman
Date: 11/1/2015 10:07:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Richard.
Date: 11/1/2015 5:11:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Welcome to soup..Sara
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James Inman
Date: 11/1/2015 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Sara.
Date: 11/1/2015 3:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win James. This must have taken some time.
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James Inman
Date: 11/1/2015 10:04:00 AM
Thanks for the nice comment, Dan.
Date: 10/31/2015 4:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem, James, which was packed with imagery. Congratulations on your nice win! Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 11/1/2015 12:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra. I enjoyed this contest.
Date: 10/31/2015 3:31:00 PM
vivid descriptive write James many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 11/1/2015 12:01:00 AM
Thanks Jan. My writes may be going a bit overboard. I think I'll do some simple ones next.
Date: 10/10/2015 1:25:00 PM
Wonderful write very intreging a 7 !!
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James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 10/7/2015 5:15:00 PM
Dear James Wow and you want to read a thrilling novel from me my new friend, just wait a minute where can I buy yours first, this was a chilling to the inner bone scary poem, a story to read by a camp fire light to scare the blank not out of children but adults, lol loved it and the lines at the end finish it with a powerful screaming effect, thanks for your comment but I'm you an awesome rathing on this one, a clear seven, cheri
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James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 8:22:00 PM
Oh what deliciously sweet words from a master. Thank you Cherl. Can't wait to have time to read more of yours.
Date: 10/5/2015 6:08:00 PM
ooh, that last part delectably creepy. ultimate chocolates. Great line. you are a very descriptive writer, awesome!
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James Inman
Date: 10/6/2015 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, always appreciate your comments.
Date: 10/5/2015 5:11:00 PM
Oh, It's deeply scary and yet sublime. enjoyed it!
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James Inman
Date: 10/6/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thank You Dew.
Date: 10/5/2015 4:10:00 PM
James this is gruesome great work.
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James Inman
Date: 10/6/2015 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Michael.
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