Hallelujah - Victory

monorhyme

Holy, Holy, Holy Three
Greater Father cannot be
Righteous Savior sets men free
Spirit's here to pilot me
Laud the Blessed Trinity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 12:17 AM
Oh, the one right above this one on the list is similar in feelings it evokes. VEry good and nicely metered too. Congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Reason
Poet Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Wonderful write Reason!Congrats on your win---kashinath
Freeman Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Wonderful to see you in the winning circle, Reason with this worthy poem's ninth place win. Congratulations on your honored placement. Agape, Moses
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March 17, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Enjoyed the spiritual quality of your poem, Reason. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations Reason on your win in the "Golden Gratitude" contest sponsored by Adeleke Adeite. Love, Carol
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March 17, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Congrats Reason on your big win in the Golden Gratitude contest luv..wonderful words.. great inspirational write ..enjoy with luv..
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