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Hallelujah

YEP! Finally made it below that magic number As of today 199.4 lbs, it's been a while since I was under Perseverance it takes For my health's sake Hallelujah! What a feeling, like I woke up from a slumber

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Silent One

Date: 10/4/2017 9:44:00 AM

Haha! Glad you woke up, finally..

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2017 9:59:00 AM

Been up for hours... just designed a poster for the last community I lived in! Also used to design their monthly newsletter way back them!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/4/2017 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations, you wee elf//shadow of your former self//barely there//in compare//I hereby dub thee "King of Smelf" PERSEVERE ON WEE JACK!!! (Smelf? - dangifino!)

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2017 9:55:00 AM

30 minutes a day on ye o;e recumbent bikeroony!!! KING OF THE SMELF singing off!!!!!!!!! lol

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2017 8:28:00 AM

This is great news my friend, now you just need to keep yourself under that number, and continue to go lower! How tall are you? That would be critical in determining your good weight! I loved your poem about this, this morning! You certainly brought to me something that I need to take care of too, as I'm near that mark too, and I'm shorter than you I bet! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2017 9:53:00 AM

YUP! That's the key... staying on the path! BTW I'm just under 5'10"... whatta stunning specimen!!! YEE HAW!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/4/2017 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations Jack! xomo :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2017 7:02:00 AM

Hallelujah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxx