Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Senryu

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16.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Halfway Through October: Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

2 place in the contest

- Halfway Through October -

                                           orange sherbet sun
                                      prepare your jack-o'-lantern -
                                            a toothless monster

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Ink Empress October 29, 2023 at 3:26 AM Back with heartfelt wishes, congratulations Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:11 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Ink :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2023 at 10:14 AM that sure is cute. Congrats in my contest Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:11 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler October 24, 2023 at 8:41 AM Teehee Anne-Lise my friend. This one is so cute! Love it! :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:11 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Linda :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman October 18, 2023 at 11:11 AM Love it, Anne-Lise! Your haikus are always a fresh creation from your creativity! I always enjoy reading them and savoring your poetic spirit! Blessings and hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:10 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Sam :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma October 17, 2023 at 7:07 AM Oh my, this gives me Halloween vibes so impeccably, I love your ' orange sherbet sun" especially, that's so unique and profound, dear Anne-Lise! I absolutely enjoyed reading this, a captivating senryu indeed!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:10 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Hiya :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel October 17, 2023 at 5:36 AM Brilliant one, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:10 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jo :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino October 16, 2023 at 2:31 PM Love it! Love Halloween -- some of my best friends have eyes just like those...with stubble left of teeth. Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:09 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Jan Allison October 16, 2023 at 1:39 PM lol this one is fun Anne-Lise, I especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:09 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jan :) - hugs

Silent One October 16, 2023 at 12:07 PM oooh this one is clever.. nice arrangement of words.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:09 AM - Many thanks for your comment, S.O.:) - hugs

Jay Narain October 16, 2023 at 10:57 AM Nice Senyru. GL in contest. Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:09 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith October 16, 2023 at 10:45 AM A creative/fun~write/picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away...................... Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 3:08 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Paula :) - hugs

Sotto Poet October 16, 2023 at 8:11 AM Anne-Lise, your entry for the contest theme is truly remarkable. The way you have eloquently expressed your thoughts and ideas is nothing short of awe-inspiring. Great picture too. BOL with the contest Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2023 at 10:02 AM - I have hardly seen a pumpkin, Las ... not so common in Norway ... but, it would be fun to make a "jack-o'-lantern" :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Alexis Y. October 16, 2023 at 7:41 AM Hi Anne-Lise, You have penned a good entry for the contest theme. Nice photo too. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2023 at 9:57 AM - Never good to know what the sponsor of the contest wants ... but, like to participate :) - Have a wonderful day to you too, Alexis :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Ink Empress October 16, 2023 at 5:51 AM “Orange sherbet sun” wow i love that so creative and so well written! One of the most prettiest halloween poems iv read. Love this Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2023 at 9:53 AM - Glad you liked my suggestion for this contest, Ink ...it just popped out of thin air :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar October 16, 2023 at 5:40 AM My monster is at my hospital as I have a few tests to do. A lovely "scary" haiku. Loved it. Hugs and blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2023 at 9:50 AM - Creepy monster at the hospital ... be careful, Victor :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs