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Half-Past Three (The Poet), Marc Chagall

I sit in scarlet-slashed silence
refusing to permit the
piercing dark
to stain the sky with ugliness ~
so forgive the
receptors of resilient rectangles;
I witness smoke of confusion
drifting through
a distorted perspective
while ink bleeds
3 a.m. across the caffeinated canvas
where crimson
crowns blurred
borders of boundaries,
leaving no room for twisted tales
to tamper and tweak the truth
of a mind devoted to
peace and poetry ~
while the host of hostility
bereft of humility
plots to curate cortisol
forked within
the silverware of spite

let not the hurt ~ 
O inverted intruder
teach the bruised blade
to talk in textures
that could trigger
a tormented tornado 
beneath ice-cold nails
as karma follows
the feline eyes
of cruel consequences
    to your doorstep

I chose to be the current
flowing above unapologetic roses
no longer seeking
validation nor sagas
spoken soundlessly to the stars
I mark the withering
of wickedness 
and woeful words
to embrace the
light of Heaven’s house ~
the ultimate ultraviolet
dripping from the
          hands of hope

read me as I reweave 
a valley of awakened dreams
where desires
spell themselves 
in deep blues of devotion
nevermore vainly vulnerable ~ 
amidst the geography
of gilded grace
crossing the length of my limbs
until I arrive
at a guiltless lane of immutable love…
            
            It’s half past three. 
  I am fully awake ~ 
                     but I am neither 
          an insomniac nor a sleeper, 
                      merely a word-dreamer
                  in love with Poetry ...
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Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 7:33 PM
Alright! Can't let those convoluted, contorted cubists disrupt our lives!!! ~ Alice B. Toklas
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:15 PM
This oozes with beauty, Inky. I love love the ending you gave it. 3 am has a bad connotation as the witches hour , but you have turned into the hour of a beautiful dreamer. A big like on this one 💕
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:35 AM
Awwn thank you so much sweet Andrea… I was literally sleepless when I wrote this haha. Theres something beautiful about brutal honesty I guess 🥹 appreciate your presence always ~ Sending you light always
Onclaud Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 5:05 PM
I had to relish this poesy as my heart pulses with chagall's artistry...your intimate, almost brash plea to merge canvas with quill is mint, ink.. riding above slight alliteration, your pen wielded a unique wordplay of metaphors and assonance, ''drifting through a distorted perspective while the ink bleeds...' yes, you made my soul throb...namaste!
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:33 AM
Awwn I love that I made your soul throb beautiful soul! Appreciate your generous and warm comment. Sending you light always ~
Lane Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 12:18 PM
An abstract artwork by Chagall that seems to be existing in an upside-down world, but you took it head on and made sense of it. Let not the hurt of any intruder trigger us to the point of negativity. We're all searching for immutable, irrefutable love whether it's to be found in the lines of poetry or in the heart of a beloved. 💕
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:33 AM
Your wisdom moves me sweet linnersz, its like as if you felt the depth of this poem truly. Thank you for sharing such deep thoughts so sincerely, i am grateful and i love how you described what our soul keeps searching… thank you so much Poetry Mama Sending you light always
Godwin Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 12:06 PM
I am not familiar with him, but I know a beautiful poem of depth of imagery awe when I read one (usually.) I enjoyed this very much. Seems you found the perfect picture. (If for Brian, I'm sure he'll embrace it.)
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 1:57 AM
Your comments are so very soul warming dear Cay Cay. Thank you so much for visiting my poems. I appreciate your kind presence ~ sending you light always
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 11:16 AM
A beautiful ekphrasis Ink that captures the dreamlike artwork of Chagall, at the same time taking us on a journey from hurt and hostility towards hope, I particularly liked forked cortisol within the silverware of spite, (pretty genius and a fave for that) and also for your final stanza that poets everywhere will be nodding in agreement with! Powerful Ink! Cheers David
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 1:57 AM
I zoomed in ~ so much, to capture tiny details in the artpiece, like the fork and so much more which was of convenience as It did resonate ~ I love the kitten too there. Reminded me of My little ragdoll … thank you so much for the fave and also for the comment ~ sending you light always
Sharma  Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 2:28 AM
"o forgive the receptors of resilient rectangles;" ahh and the host of hostility! Gosh those rectangles i dun find them forgiving until we have bled our hearts and poured them into their heart (notes) lololol my phone is filled with them. Brilliant work as always! Love this as always ! Sending you rosy stars, mermaid moonbeams and fairy flowerszzssss 🧜‍♀️ 🧚‍♀️ 💫 🌙 ❤️‍🩹 ❤️‍🔥 A fave as always
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 1:54 AM
Awwn I am loving the mermaid moonbeams and rosy stars and also the fave! Thank you so much truly. Sending you light always soulful poetess
Sharma  Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 2:23 AM
Ahhh merely a word dreamer in love with poetry!!!! GOSHHH how stunning this is! Wowzieezzz my sweet inky fairy goddess! These 3 a.m. thoughts, i resonate with this so much! Staying awakened in those hours and contemplating the geography of everything! "as karma follows the feline eyes of cruel consequences to your doorstep" wow i felt chills reading that line 🔥🔥🤌🏻🖤🖤 I am basically awake till then due to insomnia but most times, my intuition keeps telling things and it's sort of amusing
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 1:54 AM
I know my angelic star, you and your mother are very intuitive souls! And I am grateful to have your support always ~ awwn you always feel the energy of poems! Thank you for being here. ~ sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 9:54 AM
I struck my table ding 🛎️ bell seven times in approval of this masterpiece!!! Stella, my cat, got startled… then I read it to her out loud and she was happy.
Empress Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 11:48 AM
Poor stella! Pity her haha lol the bell! And also had to listen to my poetry read? Good grief! I wish stella would receive a treat for patience hahah! But why 7 times? Thats a good number tho. Thank you dear Robert! You are funny. Sending you light always
Borg Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 7:12 AM
"I am neither an insomniac nor a sleeper, merely a word-dreamer in love with Poetry.....read me as I reweave a valley of awakened dreams". Beauty captured in every word. How can we stop reading such words penned by such a word-dreamer?
Empress Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 11:45 AM
You are so kind dear Pascal. Haha. Some would disagree with you and would give you all the reasons why you should read anyone but me. Haha. I am grateful for your kindness. Sending you light always
Bordner Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 6:18 AM
I know why Poetry is deeply in love with you Poetess...
Empress Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 11:44 AM
Its amazing how just one line can speak so much! You really are so poetic, dear Justin. I love knowing that poetry is deeply in love with me. Thank you for always touching my poems with unwavering warmth. Sending you light always 🌹
DiMino Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 5:11 AM
"I mark the withering of wickedness and woeful words to embrace the light of Heaven’s house ~ " -- Love that! Very profound and inspiring. "It’s half past three. I am fully awake ~ but I am neither an insomniac nor a sleeper, merely a word-dreamer in love with Poetry ... " -- Totally love that!! Great writing!
Empress Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 11:40 AM
Thank you so much dear Jo. Appreciate your quoting lines you like. Grateful for your support. Sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 1:08 AM
Over time I'm getting to know the works of the great artists through your interpretations, and seeing beyond the paintings. 🎨 Another gem from your gifted pen IE. Hope you're week is going well. Tom🌹
Empress Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much for being so supportive dear Tom. I hope your travels are going well. Appreciate your kindness. I love this painting too. Sending you light always
Lane Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 3:49 PM
You two ladies trip me out! If I didn’t know you both better I’d be worried about you “oiling yourself up,” miss Ink. No borders and boundaries for either of you and I don’t think either of you would ever consider tweaking the truth. 💕 love ya both!
Lane Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 4:11 PM
Scribble away! I read you loud and clear. Silence is preferred to s screams. ❤️
Empress Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Hahah linnersz, she is my cousin as you know and her marbles bit scattered 😂 haha! Yes boundaries are very important. Thank you for reading this so positively ! It is a very quick " scribble" 🥱 haha Sending you light always 😈 💋
Onpaper Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:27 PM
while ink bleeds 3 a.m. across the caffeinated canvas… I love her 3.am bleeds… it’s absolutely secaaaaY!!!! where crimson crowns blurred borders of boundaries,… mmmmmhmmm yaaas papiii… inverted intruder teach the bruised blade to talk in textures that could trigger… ooooo chiiiild look at u gooo !!! It’s hoooot!! 🔥 chose to be the current flowing above unapologetic roses..u r the current flow running through the tunnels of my heart Papi!!! ❤️… read me as I reweave .. oh try n stop me !!! where desires spell themselves in deep blues of devotion… oh it’s spelling alright… it’s goin .. kuuuundhalini saktiiiiii….absolutely divine papiii 🕊️
Onpaper Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:34 PM
In that case lemme leave the doooor wiiide open ae… I shalll oil myself up real nice for u aeee 👀😉🌸
Empress Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:33 PM
I know where you live papi! I will see you soon! 😈
Onpaper Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Oh dare not the delusional demons!!!! Dnt even thinkkkkk to try indeeed!!
Empress Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:30 PM
Hahahhaa kundalinii is awake! Dnt test me papi! U dont wanna try!
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