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Poetry/Free Verse/Half Past Summer, Two Months Left
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All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, June 19, 2025/ AI Free
For the International Contest, 
Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall (Option 5/Free Verse)
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 07/27/2025

FIRST PLACE

"Every flower speaks rapture to me swaying in the summer breeze"

                                             Quote by_ Constance

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Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall

 
"Every leaf speaks bliss to me, fluttering from the autumn tree." Emily Bronte
I wish the summer would last forever. But it is half past summer already. Some parts of my garden are decaying. But there is still beauty in those withered plants. I pause to contemplate. Yes, divine will be the colours of fall. The red, yellow, and orange leaves will be dancing. Just two months till fall, and I am dreaming of the sublime.
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Allison Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Love the way you've transitioned Summer to autumn with the decaying plants and then written of the beauty of the colours of fall. many congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 3:09 AM
Jan, thank you for the compliment, comment, congratulations, blessings ~
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write and quote. Oh yes, fall is coming in just two months with new colors for us to enjoy. Have a blessed day with your win................
La France Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment on my quote and poem, blessings ~
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:09 AM
This is gorgeous free verse. Love how you blended shorter lines in with longer ones and the idea of the garden to express the interval between seasons. Big congrats, Constance
La France Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Andrea, thank you for the contest and my great placement, appreciate so much and for the nice comment and congrats, blessings~
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 6:49 AM
Our thoughts often not a straight line. We enjoy the beauty the seasons bring, and the regret of having to let go. Congrats!
La France Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Kim, thank you for the comment and congrats, appreciate, blessings ~
Canerdy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 6:31 AM
Constance, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this great entry. Janice
La France Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Janice, thank you for the congrats and compliment, blessings ~
George Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 9:48 PM
I too love summer, if it is not too humid. But I love autumn best though we don't have a well marked autumn here. I have been to U.S and have witnessed the beauty of Autumn. Beautifully written, dear Constance.
La France Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for sharing and for the compliment, appreciate
Chiri Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Wow you still write amazing pieces girl! I’m back! :) waiting for a contest from you!
La France Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 2:19 PM
Brenda, nice to hear from you, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate, I will a new contest going in a few days. Constance
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