Gershon Wolf Poet Limerick

Half a Loaf Is - Forget It

The Johnsons' vacation in Island Bay
To get there they drive an awful long way
   Over hill, over dale
   Then across dusty trails
 They check in and get to stay half a day



     gw               limerick            June 07, 2022

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Bill Baker June 13, 2022 at 4:42 PM Bummer unless they just like driving.

Caren Krutsinger June 9, 2022 at 10:20 AM This sums up why I never want to"vacation" anywhere again; I prefer my "stay-cation"

Robert Gorelick June 8, 2022 at 7:24 PM I'm sure they'll half a great time, if they don't run out of bread! You are the limerick prince...Robert

Ann Foster June 8, 2022 at 3:57 PM Sometimes we go so far to get away, to find we are still in the same place... with ourselves... Great write. Ann

Anne E Sangster - K June 8, 2022 at 1:36 PM Lol :-D Love it! Your limerick is just what the doctor ordered. Cheers my friend :-)

L Milton Hankins June 8, 2022 at 9:21 AM They could have just as much fun and a longer stay in their local state park, methinks. Gershon Wolf June 8, 2022 at 7:54 PM Great suggestion, Milt. It's off to the State Park for the Johnsons! :) gw

Jeff Kyser June 8, 2022 at 7:30 AM I'm sure that trek gets pretty old; The upside is the bread won't mold...

Mike Gentile June 8, 2022 at 6:04 AM I hope that they had the AARP discount!! Happy Wednesday GW!!! Gershon Wolf June 8, 2022 at 7:54 PM Well, the Johnson's got 'half-off!' lol. Thanks, Mike. Hope all is well. ~ gw

Deb M June 8, 2022 at 3:43 AM Ha….a lot of effort for a little time…,cute one GW….Cheers Debx

Sara Kendrick June 8, 2022 at 3:12 AM Cute one. I wonder if they enjoyed the country scenery on the way? I am glad you shared this one. I got a chuckle. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham June 8, 2022 at 12:42 AM Hope it was worth it lol