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Half a Heart

O that beautiful day as a teen! Our eyes met while the hearts danced lightly, Like primrose blooms shying from the winds. We grew a little older, our eyes shot meteors Which got embedded in the others's heart. So knotted did the hearts get that they Couldn't free from the love entanglement. I pulled it to go back with me, But your heart ripped mine and took Half of it along with you, To remain with you In your modest home of love, Under the shadow of your protection. We exchanged our marriage rings And vowed silently of our life ahead. The years passed and babies took up our hours. Together we nurtured them for years, In our modest home of love to remain In the shadow of our protection. I gave half my heart to you The other half I gave to my girls Now my complete heart is with you And our grown up babies. I give it all so happily, Never to ever want it back. January 24, 2016 *Half A Heart is sentimental as it is reaches the depths of a woman's heart who by giving parts of her heart to her loved ones, ends up giving her compltee heart to her family and is happiest about it.

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Date: 2/3/2016 11:38:00 PM
you are welcome
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:42:00 PM
BALVEEN, Congrats on your win in "Edward Ebbs" contest. LINDA -
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/1/2016 3:24:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/25/2016 7:41:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your placement in the contest *smiles* -luloo
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 1/24/2016 10:17:00 PM
BALVEEN, Congrats on your awesome, win. Luv **SKAT**
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 1/24/2016 9:20:00 PM
Congrats Baleen, thank you for entering this contest :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 11:41:00 AM
Thanks Edward!
Date: 1/14/2016 10:49:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:23:00 AM
What a magnificent appreciation, Funom! Thanks!
Date: 1/7/2016 3:42:00 PM
oh, this is so sweet how you made the half a heart theme . very unique from other poems!! Maybe I will write about an old love . He TRULY did have half a heart!!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:24:00 AM
That is so adorable of you to say so, Andrea! Thanks!

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