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Half-Spherical Raindrop

. A half-spherical raindrop rolls... ... becomes a sphere

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Sara. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:33:00 AM

Sara, It's nice to be here and see your win. Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/7/2010 6:48:00 PM

that image looks cool, Sara. . . yo' drippy drops of water in this poem . .(: your brain is like a sphere made up of all sorts of creative stuff, like a creative forest, gosh.sorry i havn't commented back in time, something happened.have a great night. -Always&Forever Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/6/2010 1:39:00 PM

so creative!! Light & Love

Sheol Moribund

Date: 5/6/2010 11:43:00 AM

I really dig this poem, AWESOME!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:20:00 PM

this is so cool, how half a circle grows fully. Congratulations! LUv, andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/5/2010 8:01:00 AM

How entirely different. Congratulations on your third place. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:01:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 4:59:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your 3rd place win in Brian's contest with this great Monoku.. and how honored am I to be sharing 3rd place with u... VERY... enjoy sweet Sara.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/5/2010 4:53:00 AM

Unique and exceptional, Sara. congrats to you in Brian's contest! ....and thanks for the soup mail! -Robert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 5:42:00 AM

crystal of a spherical creature.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/1/2010 8:23:00 PM

Good one for the contest.. good luck if your entry for Brian... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Judy Riley

Date: 5/1/2010 3:53:00 PM

It is what it is ...good, thanks for sharring clever. Judy Riley