Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Halcyon Days

The countryside is as delectable as an apple pie, feel free to dip in and enjoy a slice of my world , quote by poet



When I need to relax and seek quiet meditation
I head for the countryside without any hesitation

My weekend retreat’s perched on top of the hill
far away from the city, it’s so peaceful and still

The picturesque lake is such a tranquil scene
with the mountains reflected it looks so serene

Cool fresh mountain air is like a soothing balm
I’m at one with nature, I’m content and calm

Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Contest

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05/14/21

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Kim Merryman August 11, 2021 at 3:26 PM This sounds so peaceful and calming. Wish I had a place like that to go! Congrats on your win, Jan! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France May 25, 2021 at 3:59 AM Jan, well done and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your beautiful poem, quote and image, love _Constance

Marilene Evans May 23, 2021 at 12:56 PM Beautifully written. I remember when I was standing and looking at the Emerald Lake, so green, so serene... so stunning.. too bad, we were only there for a quick stop. Congratulations!!

Beryl Edmonds May 23, 2021 at 11:52 AM Back with congratulations Jan, a well deserved win… Hugs, Belle :-) xx

Christuraj Alex May 22, 2021 at 10:10 PM Congratulations!

Lindsay Laurie May 17, 2021 at 6:34 PM Hello Jan ... there is nothing more calming than gazing across a body of water. Your poem tells it all - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Eve Roper May 16, 2021 at 11:07 AM This sounds so peaceful, Jan, great imagery. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Joanna Daniel May 16, 2021 at 3:40 AM Your write makes me calm indeed, beautiful, Jan:)

Gershon Wolf May 15, 2021 at 7:50 PM So calm, soothing, and relaxing. Jan. Take me there soooooooon! :) gw

Terry Flood May 15, 2021 at 11:42 AM I can almost feel my tired muscles relax. Maybe if i read it again it will ease my poor aching back (major gardening work). Nice write, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Terry

Rico Leffanta May 15, 2021 at 11:23 AM Well thought and done, Jan! For years, doctors have been telling people to avoid the sun but now science has clearly established the benefits to our health and especially our eyesight, to get out and enjoy Mother Nature! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico

Beryl Edmonds May 15, 2021 at 6:40 AM Sound simply exquisite Jan, you live in a lovely place, though I’ve never been to the Isle of Man I'd like to get there to see it one day. Fabulous write and quote too… Belle x

Tom Cunningham May 15, 2021 at 1:45 AM There is no better place Jan, love your quote, just back from the New Forest, had a lovely week apart from a bit of rain, lovely to see the wild ponies. Hope you're well. Tom

Victor Buhagiar May 15, 2021 at 1:04 AM Your writing prompt was great. Perfect use of the words chosen. Hugs

Sotto Poet May 14, 2021 at 6:34 PM Very well penned, Jan; all the words were perfectly inserted, with great imagery; I enjoyed reading and the lovely picture

David Mchattie May 14, 2021 at 4:43 PM Very clever and wonderful imagery my friend. Nature doesn't like me very much so I tend to stay close to home but it sounds great. Stay well. Jan Allison May 14, 2021 at 4:54 PM we are so lucky living on a beautiful safe little island, we don't need to have a place to escape to we have a golden beach 5 minutes walk away and glorious countryside 5 minutes in the opposite direction:-) hugs Jan xx