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Poetic Form: Sapphic Stanza

Inspired: 2023 October 09

 

*2nd Place*
Halcyon, Heartbroken, House Words
Contest Judged: 2023 October 10
Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

Image: Autumn Leaves by Halcyon Realms

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

"Halcyon moments are privileges for the destitute.", by the poet The nectarous voices are whispering bye, as seasons substitute one for the other, remodeling landscapes harmoniously, ~~subtle surrenders, A balmy brush of sand granules shifts a beach, while warm bodies lie are gloriously blessed, ere a quarterly sunset soothingly sound, ~~humid loses fair, Pastoral renders reconciliation, as a glamorous nature fluctuates gleam, anon vividness slowly acquiesces, ~~restful greenroom folds, Milk-warm coolly sedates creaminess cascades, cushioning mellow fields of snowy delights, entreating eyes amidst shimmering pleasures ~~picturesque shuffles.

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Date: 10/20/2023 1:11:00 PM
Hilo, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your quote and image, Constance
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:18:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, as I thumb my way through poetic forms that may serve my use. Aloha William
Date: 10/12/2023 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely quote/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 10/12/2023 3:15:00 PM
Aloha, Paula! You are truly an inspiration to my soul, blessings to you as well! Mahalo, William
Date: 10/11/2023 2:50:00 PM
A beautiful idyllic poem Dear William my friend. hugs :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 4:32:00 PM
I'm grateful for your kindness, Linda, Aloha William

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