Hairline Fracture

you & i are animals
spawned from the
mud & flailing at 
one another with 
blades made of 
flint & with fists 
hard bloody 
knuckles all 
calloused from 
fight after fight 
after fight---for 
food, for water, for 
shelter, for women,
for men, for money, 
for kin, for future, 
for present, for 
places not yet dreamed
of we swing with our
eyes closed and keep
crashing down upon 
faces that we will never
see unbloodied---at
the bottom of this 
monstrosity of a 
mountain, a wall, a 
divide that we cannot
climb over, that we 
cannot yet kick down 
or blow up, we see the
rock sliding down our
way & just like the 
sniveling slaves that we
are to our own devices
we catch the spinning
neon ball and hoist its
immense weight back 
towards the top of this
ever increasing slope 
that is coated with the
slickest oil ever 
discovered---we do this
in spit of all that we are
really & truly capable of
because for some reason
we still find it 
necessary to destroy
each other in the name
of illusionary creations
such as “gods” & 
“nations,” neither of 
which anyone can 
pinpoint on a map or 
cross over in the night
without a president &
a preacher marching
hand in hand with their
thumbs both poised on
our naïve pulse &
THE BUTTON.

the stress is but a hairline 
fracture
developing 
rapidly
into true death
for us all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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