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Hair of Red

Born in 1947 a delicate post war child So shy was she and nervous too a flimsy fragile flower who when her mother took her out began to scream began to shout Her hair drew great attention from old dears far and wide titian with a hint of auburn shiny and sumptuous speckled with gold so shy she abhorred it old ladies adored it as they stopped in the street to Mother would speak as they oohed as they aahed as they stroked as they patted ignoring the child underneath She hated her hair for the colour it was and the hoards of old dears with their oohing and aahing their stroking and patting She wanted to run she wanted some fun so she hatched up a plan and with scissors in hand she cut she snipped she hacked until finally her hair was no longer there When Mother discovered the damage she’d done she screamed and she shrieked an attack of the vapors sent her spiraling down as she fell to her feet For her beautiful girl with her auburn hair was now bald not a single hair was there The child was delighted no more oohing nor aahing no more patting nor stroking Over the years her hair grew back the shy fragile flower she blossomed Learning to love her auburn locks they found her a perfect lover This gorgeous man ~ there was no other was rather partial to hair of red his oohing and aahing his patting and stroking she really loved and for 41 years they were wed he was rather partial to hair of red... Written 8th July 2019 I am that titian/auburn haired child… Contest: Childhood Memories Sponsor:Chantelle Anne Cooke N/A Contest: You and yours Sponsor:Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 7/12/2019 2:35:00 PM
I can relate to this wonderful poem so much as my mother, me and my daughter all share that hair color. My mother had bright auburn hair and my daughter and I have strawberry blonde. There are not that many red heads in this world. I am happy it attracted your mate. Congratulations on your wonderful first placement. : ) xxoo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/13/2019 1:10:00 AM
Oh thank you Connie for your lovely comments. Great to know you and your family are like me, one of a very rare breed, apparently only 2% of the population have red hair and we will never go grey, just a lovely shade of strawberry blonde, haha. So good to hear from you Connie I always appreciate your visits. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/12/2019 10:34:00 AM
What a lovely story and well written. Congrats on your win
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/12/2019 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne for your lovely comments and glad you liked my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/11/2019 5:19:00 PM
Wonderful story, Ann, I can see the damage the little girl had done to herself. Congratulations on your win.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/11/2019 6:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve for your lovely comments and congrats. It is always so good to hear from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/11/2019 9:22:00 AM
This is so good, I love how you told your story. I am adding this to my favourites. This has my vote for POTD!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/11/2019 6:24:00 PM
Wow, such wonderful comments Richard thank you! So good to hear you have made it a Fav and that you thought it worthy of POTD - one day maybe... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/10/2019 10:30:00 AM
Loved this Ann! From start to finish. A peek into your history. Many thanks, Panagiota
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/11/2019 6:19:00 PM
Many thanks Panagiota for your lovely comments, it is always so good to hear from you. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/10/2019 5:28:00 AM
Very delightful writing dearest, Ann! Much enjoyed ! ...I wish I had ...some hair myself... any color ! hahaha
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/11/2019 6:17:00 PM
Hahaha, thank you so much dear Demetrios for your lovely comments, truly appreciated. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/9/2019 1:38:00 PM
- Red hair is gorgeous Ann, especially the dark variety that is "bronze colored" :) - Many children with red hair are bullied, and has incredibly low self-confidence - No one should feel bad because of a hair color - A great write - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/9/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much and so good to see you again Anne-Lise. Glad you liked my poem and thank you for your best wishes too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/8/2019 5:47:00 PM
aww Ann I welled up reading your poem , so glad you came to love your hair colour - i love the colour so much I have it ... but mine is out of a bottle lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/8/2019 5:54:00 PM
Oh bless you Jan for your lovely comments. I suppose because I was so shy I hated the attention my hair colour attracted. but of course my darling Frank had a thing for redheads, and as the poem says we were married for 41 years. Thanks again Jan, with kindest thoughts Ann xx my hair is now more of a strawberry blonde...

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