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Hair Fight

She gathers her arms for her nightly fight to do battle with her hair, to “get it right” she’s been cursed with unruly, super fine hair that won’t cooperate and flies everywhere. Oh, to have thick, voluminous hair so sheik, so silky, so shiny and fair spun layers of gold, or deep auburn flair or lovely chestnut tones, “fabu-lair”! But, alas, unwanted whispy is she as she settles into her pin-curl “soirée” she wrestles her head scarf to keep it tight and prays it “stays put” while she sleeps at night. In the morning, her second round fight resumes unpinning her curls, knows they’ll fall flat real soon next comes the teasing, the crimping, the spray knowing the volume won’t last half a day. Then sighing, with hand mirror, checks every spot every turn, every angle, she does this a lot I wait for my mother to finish her hair If “it isn’t right” we’re not going anywhere!

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Date: 5/16/2025 12:09:00 PM
I don't know Laura my wife has a lot of hair, I think it has taken a majority of my money and her time to tame it, but she does look beautiful,,, so I guess it's worth it, It's still nice to know I'm not alone, Thanks for sharing
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2025 2:03:00 AM
I’d love to have a lot of hair to work with! But, alas, we get what is given to us and try to make the best of it! Thanks for commenting, Jerry! :)
Date: 5/16/2025 9:06:00 AM
Great poem! I have a younger sister who you knew was having a hair fight in the morning, when she made clear (very vocally) things were not going her way. It ended with lots of hair spray.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2025 2:01:00 AM
Ha, ha! Women generally have a a “love-hate” relationship with their hair! Thanks for stopping by to comment, Tom! :)
Date: 5/16/2025 6:58:00 AM
- It takes time to get her hair "perfect" ... the wind will play with it when she comes out :) - An entertaining poem, Laura ... great written :) - hugs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/16/2025 7:03:00 AM
Thanks for commenting, Anne-Lise. Glad you liked my light hearted poem (it’s also true, poor mom)! :)
Date: 5/16/2025 6:55:00 AM
Ha! Humorous spin on the theme. Yeah, not everyone is blessed with "Cher hair"
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/16/2025 7:00:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, for stopping by! Yes, mom’s had a lifetime fight with her poor hair, ha! :D

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