Hair Fight

She gathers her arms for her nightly fight
to do battle with her hair, to “get it right”
she’s been cursed with unruly, super fine hair
that won’t cooperate and flies everywhere. 

Oh, to have thick, voluminous hair
so sheik, so silky, so shiny and fair
spun layers of gold, or deep auburn flair
or lovely chestnut tones, “fabu-lair”!

But, alas, unwanted whispy is she
as she settles into her pin-curl “soirée”
she wrestles her head scarf to keep it tight
and prays it “stays put” while she sleeps at night. 

In the morning, her second round fight resumes
unpinning her curls, knows they’ll fall flat real soon
next comes the teasing, the crimping, the spray
knowing the volume won’t last half a day. 

Then sighing, with hand mirror, checks every spot
every turn, every angle, she does this a lot
I wait for my mother to finish her hair
If “it isn’t right” we’re not going anywhere!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 8:36 AM
4th place, a good place to land! Congrats! I can relate to super fine hair!! Love that pin-curl “soiree (brought back memories, don’t have patience for that) and the last line is a hoot! You know when you don’t care..when your getting an epidural and they call you to come early…lol (me yesterday! (see my blog)
Leiser Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 12:50 PM
Thanks, Kim, for my placement in your fun contest! Glad you got a kick out of my poem (it’s true, too!) lol! Hugs! :)
Curtis Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 12:09 PM
I don't know Laura my wife has a lot of hair, I think it has taken a majority of my money and her time to tame it, but she does look beautiful,,, so I guess it's worth it, It's still nice to know I'm not alone, Thanks for sharing
Leiser Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 2:03 AM
I’d love to have a lot of hair to work with! But, alas, we get what is given to us and try to make the best of it! Thanks for commenting, Jerry! :)
Valles Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Great poem! I have a younger sister who you knew was having a hair fight in the morning, when she made clear (very vocally) things were not going her way. It ended with lots of hair spray.
Leiser Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 2:01 AM
Ha, ha! Women generally have a a “love-hate” relationship with their hair! Thanks for stopping by to comment, Tom! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 6:58 AM
- It takes time to get her hair "perfect" ... the wind will play with it when she comes out :) - An entertaining poem, Laura ... great written :) - hugs
Leiser Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Thanks for commenting, Anne-Lise. Glad you liked my light hearted poem (it’s also true, poor mom)! :)
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