Hair a Deep Vermillion

 
Hair a deep vermillion with just a hint of orange reaching almost to her waist such shiny waves and curls 'twas the envy of other girls but often they would call her names their jealousy knew no bounds it made her cry she wondered why her locks of deep vermillion with just a hint of orange instilled such hate from many but despite the names they called her she rose above these bullies her deep vermillion hair of red her crowning glory she turned his head now all grown up and so in love with babies of their own not one not two but three and all with hair a deep vermillion with just a hint of orange reaching almost to their waist they love their shiny waves and curls despite the envy of other girls... Written 20th November 2021
Contest "V"new or old Sponsor Constance La France 2nd Place Contest A STRAND (1044) Sponsor Brian Strand N/A
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La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Ann, congratulations on your Second place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful ~ love and serenity _Constance
Romios Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 4:42 AM
An immediate favorite. Kids and adults can be bullies. We grow up, but bullies seem to grown on trees. SOME FOLOIW US, SOME WILL PURPOSELY IGNORE US Here? I see bullying here all the time. These are grown up, stuck up bullies. Cold as fish-in water. Read their responses to poems... Analytical and lacking heart.worse, cliched andwers. And mean and always sarcastic. Love your poem, Ann Panagiota
Gilmour Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 3:00 PM
Thank you dear Panagiota ~ bullies are such cowards hiding behind their nasty words. Thankfully there are more beautiful souls than bullies... Love and hugs Ann xx
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Your descriptions of her bring the image alive and I see her in the portrait you brush-stroked like a painting. Well done, Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Lovely words dear Vijay thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Trust humans to be envious, Great poem.
Gilmour Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Envy is not a good trait... thanks Victor xx
Leffanta Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Jesus never met so many people so eager to cast the first stone . . . .
Gilmour Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 2:55 PM
sooo many Rico, sooo sad...
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