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Hair a Deep Vermillion

Hair a deep vermillion with just a hint of orange reaching almost to her waist such shiny waves and curls 'twas the envy of other girls but often they would call her names their jealousy knew no bounds it made her cry she wondered why her locks of deep vermillion with just a hint of orange instilled such hate from many but despite the names they called her she rose above these bullies her deep vermillion hair of red her crowning glory she turned his head now all grown up and so in love with babies of their own not one not two but three and all with hair a deep vermillion with just a hint of orange reaching almost to their waist they love their shiny waves and curls despite the envy of other girls... Written 20th November 2021
Contest "V"new or old Sponsor Constance La France 2nd Place Contest A STRAND (1044) Sponsor Brian Strand N/A

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Date: 11/29/2021 1:23:00 PM
Ann, congratulations on your Second place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/22/2021 4:42:00 AM
An immediate favorite. Kids and adults can be bullies. We grow up, but bullies seem to grown on trees. SOME FOLOIW US, SOME WILL PURPOSELY IGNORE US Here? I see bullying here all the time. These are grown up, stuck up bullies. Cold as fish-in water. Read their responses to poems... Analytical and lacking heart.worse, cliched andwers. And mean and always sarcastic. Love your poem, Ann Panagiota
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2021 3:00:00 PM
Thank you dear Panagiota ~ bullies are such cowards hiding behind their nasty words. Thankfully there are more beautiful souls than bullies... Love and hugs Ann xx
Date: 11/21/2021 5:25:00 AM
Your descriptions of her bring the image alive and I see her in the portrait you brush-stroked like a painting. Well done, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2021 2:56:00 PM
Lovely words dear Vijay thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/20/2021 12:08:00 PM
Trust humans to be envious, Great poem.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2021 2:56:00 PM
Envy is not a good trait... thanks Victor xx
Date: 11/20/2021 10:30:00 AM
Jesus never met so many people so eager to cast the first stone . . . .
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2021 2:55:00 PM
sooo many Rico, sooo sad...

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