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The darkness seeps wet
stains on tissues of regret
inked pores secrete rain.
A blurred dust of pain
edging storm clouds all absorb
the hail of the Lord.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2014 3:53:00 AM

Oh Deb, this is simply wonderful and it deserves to be in the top spot. Big Congratulations!

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/29/2014 3:20:00 PM

How much do I love this........"Let me count the ways!" :) Congrats to you.....excellent!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/28/2014 2:52:00 AM

Beautiful Debbie..:)! Congratulation!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 1:08:00 AM

a holy outpour, debbie.. cheers on your huge win.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:19:00 PM

WOW. I SEE why he chose it number one. GREAT use of language, Debs. BIG congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:19:00 PM

and that picture to go with it is something else.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/27/2014 6:12:00 PM

Congrats Deb, this is beautiful work. BG

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/27/2014 12:06:00 PM

exceptional poem. love it. God bless you and happy writing.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/27/2014 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your top of the podium place with this brilliant Chaka Debbie.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/27/2014 10:02:00 AM

Great winning write, Debbie. Love, Joyce

John Lawless

Date: 9/27/2014 9:09:00 AM

Does this mean that the reception committee in heaven sings......wait for it......Hail, Hail the gangs all here...........Great job with a tricky form. congrats on the win.

Abdul Malik

Date: 9/27/2014 9:08:00 AM

Nice write. Well-deserved win. congrats

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 7:10:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN. THIS CHOKA IS ABSOLUTELY DESERVING.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 7:09:00 AM

Your photograph choice for this piece is perfect. It's a beautiful photograph.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 7:06:00 AM

Debbie, I don't what to say this choka is jaw dropping. I have to fav this one too. I am compiling a list of incredible examples of various forms.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2014 6:25:00 AM

Fantastic piece Debbie, congratulations.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/27/2014 6:00:00 AM

Very beautiful, Debbie. I love " tissues of regret." Congratulations.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2014 5:06:00 AM

Congratulations on this top winner, Debbie! It is deep and inspiring....with the bonus of added rhyme. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 4:29:00 AM

Extremely deep n sensitive! Graceful write Debbie! Congrats on ur first place win!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 2:21:00 AM

Very deep with great imagery Debbie, Many congrats on your top place:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2014 1:51:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Deb. Light and Love

Brian Strand

Date: 6/10/2009 11:31:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Debbiel.Rgds Brian

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 5/20/2009 6:32:00 AM

This one feels biblical to me, like the Egypt plague. I like Dane's idea that it's a tattoo though. All in all I love the dark overtones.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/18/2009 5:15:00 PM

Hi Deborah, Sometimes your poetry really makes me think. At first, I thought you were talking about a tatoo. I've heard that they are so painful. But the last two lines took me on another thinking spree. Great poetry. Love, Dane

Justin Hensley

Date: 5/18/2009 2:40:00 PM

Wow deeping meaning, this is a great painting of words!

Hail

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