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Haiku-Stream Swell

stream swells as it rains
ants float on curled leaf life boats
frogs jump in to bathe

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Richard Lamoureux

August 2, 2019 at 8:37 AM

There isareal art to mastering a short form. You have certainly found it.

Warren Doll

August 5, 2019 at 11:15 AM

Richard, thanks so much! Best Wishes~ Warren

Charmaine Chircop

July 7, 2019 at 4:29 PM

Enjoyed this view you penned for us to imagine in our heads.

Warren Doll

July 15, 2019 at 10:29 AM

Charmaine, glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for your visit~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

July 6, 2019 at 6:29 PM

I enjoyed this little picture you created.

Warren Doll

July 15, 2019 at 10:26 AM

Hi Andrea, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. All the best~ Warren

Heidi Sands

May 19, 2019 at 9:43 AM

This is great and with the detail of the curled leaves too! :) I love that...the life boats :)

Warren Doll

June 7, 2019 at 7:12 AM

Hi Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it. All the best~ Warren

Bernard Chan

May 1, 2019 at 7:42 AM

Delightful haiku, Warren. Love the ants on leaf life boats. Enjoyed!

Warren Doll

May 8, 2019 at 11:23 AM

Thanks for your comments and visit, Bernard. Always appreciate your visit and critique. ~ Warren

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 17, 2019 at 5:58 AM

Refreshing Haiku dear Warren! Much liked!

Warren Doll

April 17, 2019 at 2:20 PM

My friend, thank you for your comment and visit. All the best~ Warren

Joseph May

April 15, 2019 at 10:44 PM

Very nice haiku Warren...great imagery..

Warren Doll

April 17, 2019 at 2:18 PM

Thanks so much, Joseph. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Mike Gentile

April 3, 2019 at 7:00 AM

What fun and timely imagery Warren and so deserving of your win!!

Warren Doll

April 4, 2019 at 5:53 PM

Mike, Thanks so much. Always great to hear from you!

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 21, 2019 at 3:00 PM

Stunning Haiku dear Warren!

Warren Doll

March 25, 2019 at 9:26 AM

Thanks very much, Demetrios. I always enjoy your critique and visit, All the best to you my friend~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

March 18, 2019 at 5:40 PM

Well, I wonder what part of the earth this is taking place and if that is warm or very cold water. Thought provoking I should say. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the review of my work. Sara

Warren Doll

March 19, 2019 at 10:52 AM

Sara, thanks so much for your comments and visit. I enjoy reading your work too. All the best~ Warren

Nette Onclaud

March 18, 2019 at 1:30 PM

this fine haiku deserves a win, darren... my bog congrats to you!...huggs

Warren Doll

March 19, 2019 at 10:49 AM

Thanks you, nette. Congratulations on your first place win. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Paul Callus

March 18, 2019 at 12:20 PM

A lovely descriptive three-liner, Warren. // paul

Warren Doll

March 19, 2019 at 10:45 AM

Thanks xo much, Paul. Best wishes~ Warren

Constance La France

March 18, 2019 at 10:54 AM

Warren, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku~

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 10:58 AM

Dear Heart, thanks so much. I really enjoyed your contest. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Tom Cunningham

March 18, 2019 at 4:25 AM

A perfect nature haiku Warren, loved the imagery. Congrats on your top.win. Tom

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 8:02 AM

Hi Tom, thanks so much. I'm glad you like d it. Best Wishes~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

March 17, 2019 at 11:10 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved first placement Warren! xxoo

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 8:00 AM

Thanks so much ,Connie All the best~ Warren

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 7:01 PM

What a cute poem Warren many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 7:56 AM

Hi Jan, great to hear from you. Thanks so much. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Eve Roper

March 17, 2019 at 6:40 PM

Great Haiku, Warren, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 7:53 AM

Thanks so much Eve. All the best~ Warren

Tania Kitchin

March 17, 2019 at 6:40 PM

A sweet and fun haiku, congratulations on your win!

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 7:54 AM

Thanks so much, Tania, Best Wishes, Warren

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2019 at 6:25 PM

a cute little story in this one. Congrats for your win, Warren.

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 7:51 AM

Glad that you like it. Thanks so much, Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 17, 2019 at 3:00 PM

- Congratulations, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 3:06 PM

Thank You Anne-Lise. Congratulations to you too! Warmest wishes Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

March 17, 2019 at 2:47 AM

Rain melts the snow and soon earth is covered in flowers. Lovely haiku Warren. Happy St. Patrick's Day! : ) xxoo

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 3:01 PM

Hi Connie. Thanks for your positive comments and critique. Happy St. Patrick's Day to you too. Warmest wishes~ Warren

Harry Horsman

March 16, 2019 at 11:45 AM

Excellent Haiku, so visual..

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 2:56 PM

Glad you liked it , Harry. Best Wishes~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 15, 2019 at 2:17 PM

- A fun picture ... great written, Warren :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 2:55 PM

Great to hear from you Anne-Lise. Thanks so much for your positive comments. Sending big hugs your way and wishing you the best~ Warren

Heidi Sands

March 15, 2019 at 2:07 PM

What a fun poem! Well written :)

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 2:52 PM

Hi Heidi, glad you liked it. Warmest wishes~ Warren

Joseph P. DiMino

March 15, 2019 at 1:39 PM

Great imagery! Love it!

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 2:50 PM

Thanks Joe. I'm glad you love it. All the best~ Warren

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