Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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06.08.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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stunning waterfall
a source of inspiration -
stimuli effect

1401 Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Honorable Mention

 

- Haiku X 372 - waterfall veil - shaped haiku 3 -

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Kim Rodrigues August 15, 2025 at 12:11 PM Whether they be small or great, we enjoy the stimuli effect!

Sara Kendrick August 9, 2025 at 9:37 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Aren't waterfalls beautiful. Sara K

I Am Anaya August 9, 2025 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on your placement on this most inspirational illuku. You've captured its flow, Anne-Lise. xhugs

Valsa George August 8, 2025 at 12:05 AM Your artwork of the waterfall and the image match so well. Congratulations, dear Anne. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen August 8, 2025 at 2:05 AM - Thank you very much for your comment and congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 7, 2025 at 11:22 AM WOW!!! What a creative/fun write and shape you have here. Love the pretty picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away.......... Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 12:45 PM - Contest results "Honorable Mention" on my entry, Paula - Thank you :) - hugs

Jay Narain August 7, 2025 at 10:37 AM Great haiku with beautiful waterfall picture. Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 12:40 PM - Thank you, Jay :) - hugs

Sotto Poet August 7, 2025 at 9:38 AM The haiku's lyrical description of the waterfall is spot on. Additionally, it conveys powerful feelings and images,  Anne-Lise. It will place high, no doubt. Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 10:18 AM - It "only" got Honorable Mention, Las ... thanks for your encouraging words :) - hugs

Yann Rolland August 7, 2025 at 2:45 AM the poem works very well i sounds and visual, great emotions, thanks anne lise Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 7:06 AM - Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs

Rowena Velasco August 7, 2025 at 1:46 AM Congratulations! This haiku cascades beautifully—just like the waterfall it describes. The shift to “stimuli effect” in the third line adds a refreshing, almost scientific resonance that deepens the imagery. Stunning work! Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 7:05 AM - Thank you very much for your comment and congratulations, Rowena :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar August 7, 2025 at 1:18 AM A haiku in art form. So very well done. Brian will be pleased. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 1:31 AM - Brian wasn't too pleased, Victor :))) - hugs

Connie Pachecho August 6, 2025 at 10:27 PM (._HI____) (.O O) (. ^ ) ( <> ) ( ) ( ) Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 1:33 AM - @.. @ ++ @ ( ///\\\ - thanks, Connie :) - hugs Connie Pachecho August 6, 2025 at 10:28 PM lise, nice poem and art

Abdullah Alhemaidy August 6, 2025 at 2:02 PM lookalike storm! Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 1:34 AM - Storm in a glass of water, A.A. :))) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino August 6, 2025 at 1:41 PM I like it! Very complex though, can't imagine myself even attempting to create such a work. Don't think that I could. Inspirational. Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2025 at 1:35 AM - Sure you can... thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2025 at 1:10 PM very interesting all these shapes you used. I am so bad at it!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 6, 2025 at 1:28 PM - In my opinion, haiku should not be written in shape form... (only for the contest, Andrea :) - hugs