Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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06.07.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Shaped Haiku 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul

1st place in the contest

- Haiku X 368 - the passengers - shaped haiku 2 -

                                          
                                                  .          .
                                                 . \        / .             ...   ...
                                  .             . .   """"    .  .            .
                            . .    \                 """""""               /    . . 
                                 .     """""  wild diversity  """""            .
                             . \"""" the passengers of the wind ~ """"/ .
                                        """"" dandelion S """""                   .
                                                    . """""".   E        .             ...
                                                    .\ """"/.      E        ... S
                                                         I               D  . ..
                                                         I                     ...
                                                      \  I  /
                                                       \ I /

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Connie Pachecho August 6, 2025 at 8:19 AM Anne-Lise, this is so good, creative, and artistic. I'm happy to see you take the win.

CayCay Godwin July 22, 2025 at 7:46 AM WOW, I haven't even read it yet and here I am with WOW from just looking. I cannot decipher what the wee marks are, perhaps 'n' with small font? How did you use different fonts? So creative. OK, let me read. LOVE IT. I must have a block disallowing me to see designing options on keyboards. FUN FUN ... CayCay

Duke Beaufort July 21, 2025 at 1:42 PM Anne-Lise. This is so well done. You’ve chosen the words perfectly. In some sense there are aspects of our own lives that are similar. We’re all passengers of the wind to some extent. Smiles!!

Bill Baker July 19, 2025 at 9:35 PM Loved the creativity in this fine winner. Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Phyllis Babcock July 18, 2025 at 10:10 AM I love the artistic and creative write. Wow this is awesome my friend. love phyl

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2025 at 2:43 PM Back with congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

thriveni c mysore July 16, 2025 at 9:17 PM Beautiful thought, artistic write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Krishnanand Guptar July 16, 2025 at 11:23 AM Congratulations on your first place win in this contest dear poet friend with a cute metaphorical piece with a creative illustrative shape. Wishing you a cheerful day.

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2025 at 10:55 AM I remember this one. So good. Congrats

Crystol Woods July 16, 2025 at 10:08 AM Oh nice, I like this one! The poem is great! Xo

Trina Layne July 16, 2025 at 7:11 AM Very creative interpretation, Anne-Lise!

Speaks Volumes July 11, 2025 at 6:08 PM A poet and an artist of shape. This needs no imagination by the reader to see the exploding dandelion. Beautifully done and so well expressed, being a passenger of the wind. You are truly gifted, my lovely friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 8, 2025 at 10:02 PM This is amazing, Anne-Lise, and a fave for me! :)

Valsa George July 8, 2025 at 9:45 PM Dandelion seeds, passengers of the wind! Love it and love the artistry. All the Best dear Anne! Hugs...

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2025 at 12:59 PM This is awesome!

Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2025 at 10:07 AM Ooh…great! Fave!

Tania Kitchin July 8, 2025 at 4:08 AM Anne-Lise, so creative and beautiful. - hugs.

Sara Kendrick July 7, 2025 at 4:41 PM Creative one which are not easy to do plus the educational lines of the Haiku. I enjoyed reading it. If it was written for a contest, it reads and looks like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Jan Allison July 7, 2025 at 11:25 AM WOW! hugs Jan xx

Jay Narain July 7, 2025 at 10:33 AM I never thought dandelion seeds can bring so much poetic craeativity. Great poem.

Deb M July 7, 2025 at 6:34 AM So creative and beautifully done Sweet Sunshine! Debx

Arthur Vaso July 7, 2025 at 3:22 AM simply beautiful!

Aysha Nuwas July 7, 2025 at 1:01 AM Very creative beauty you have written. peace and love.

Anne Winter July 6, 2025 at 9:11 PM Wow, this is so creative dear friend! Dandelions, the passengers of the wind... beautifully written! :) <3

Sotto Poet July 6, 2025 at 6:08 PM This is an exceptional and enjoyable poem, Anne-Lise! You convey an exquisite metaphor and a beautiful depiction.

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