Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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26.07.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 331 - bottle green -

                                  through bottle green waves
                                   glassy surface of the deep -
                                            mysterious tide

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Paul Callus August 9, 2024 at 11:54 AM Those bottle green waves are capable of tricking any unwary mind, Anne-Lise! I like how you combined the bottle and glassy surface. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Tom Cunningham August 9, 2024 at 6:15 AM The sea holds many secrets Anne-Lise, hope you are keeping well. Tom

Joseph P. DiMino July 30, 2024 at 6:41 PM Of what we know about the earth, the land masses, by comparison we know so little about the sea, 75% the worlds surface. Lovely image and words, Anne -- causing us to sink deeper into the liquid green depths of mystery.

Eileen Manassian July 29, 2024 at 9:37 PM Lovely poem at nature through your haiku. Loved that first line the most.

Duke Beaufort July 28, 2024 at 8:44 AM Anne-Lise, you have a wonderful way to describe a beautiful sea. It makes me smile! You are especially keen at describing all these fabulous places, which I assume are local.

Mike Gentile July 28, 2024 at 4:55 AM Anne-Lise, I love the images conjured by your beautiful haiku! It created a wonderful feeling for me! i hope you've been well, Happy Sunday xxoo

Tania Kitchin July 27, 2024 at 3:39 PM Anne-Lise, beautiful and inviting. -hugs

Hilda Greenhough July 27, 2024 at 2:05 PM I like this vision. Much movement occurs below the surface.

Joe Maverick July 27, 2024 at 12:26 PM A fresh and welcome tide..May within your Words reside.' May its depths exolored.' Enliven the bored..no alcahol bottles required Per se!!

Jennifer Proxenos July 27, 2024 at 12:08 PM Quite so,a mysterious tide, you have always been excellent with your Haiku. Well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Ink Empress July 27, 2024 at 9:53 AM Wow thats a beautiful picture! And what a beautiful haiku, i love the way youv written it especially “glassy surface of the deep” absolutely gorgeous! Pleasure reading your work dear anne lise, sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar July 26, 2024 at 9:43 PM Fascinating imagery, dear Anne Lise. Well done. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues July 26, 2024 at 7:16 PM bottle green waves bring to mind a message in a bottle. Like this!

Joseph May July 26, 2024 at 3:48 PM I like your description of the waves , Nicely done

Jan Allison July 26, 2024 at 3:30 PM your haiku are always exquisite Anne-Lise - so good to see you back posting, you have been missed. hugs jan xx

I Am Anaya July 26, 2024 at 1:51 PM Oh the beautiful mint colors, the imagery you pen, in your unique ku's Anne-Lise, nice to see you back. I'm stepping out for a while ha, see you soon! :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2024 at 1:59 PM - I'm just dropping by for a quick visit, Anaya ... - enjoy the summer ... the soup will have to wait until darker days ... thanks for your comment :) - hugs