Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 279 - White Daisy -

asks the white daisy
                                 found the answer - and ate it -
                                       conquest or capture


                                         made no promises
                                 it flourished reckless and wild -
                                   the ones who have smelled




04.06.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Contest, Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show
sponsor, Dilly Dally
6th place in the contest

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Brian Sambourne June 29, 2023 at 8:12 AM Grand tribute to daisies. I have them growing in large flower pots here at my home. I hope all is well with you. Cheers Brian

Linda Alice Fowler June 18, 2023 at 8:22 AM Reckless and wild daisies - love them. A great write Anne! :)

Lin Lane June 12, 2023 at 10:49 AM Dear Anne-Lise, finally over the flu enough to comment on poetry of my friends. Hugs and congratulations on your Haiku. I thought they were awesome!

I Am Anaya June 7, 2023 at 12:16 PM Stunning photo of this the love me-love-me-not flower. You've shown us, then told us, really love this one! b0l I Am Anaya June 12, 2023 at 9:13 AM Congratulations on your win! well done X Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2023 at 12:21 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Anaya :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2023 at 12:54 PM VEry interesting how you did the two very differently, Anne-Lise. I think I like them both equally!! Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2023 at 8:40 AM - Thank you, Andrea :) - hugs

Jack Horne June 5, 2023 at 5:32 AM you've done a great job here Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 7:03 AM - Thanks for the comment, Jack :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit June 5, 2023 at 5:29 AM Beautiful flowers, Anne-Lise---beautiful poetry! Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 7:03 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes June 5, 2023 at 5:27 AM I like yours a lot. Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 7:02 AM - Thank you, S.V. :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios June 5, 2023 at 4:01 AM Hi Anne I, too love daises and both haikus are Perfection. Pangie xx Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 7:04 AM - Thanks -

Sara Kendrick June 5, 2023 at 3:03 AM Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I have always loved daisies but have not had any in my garden in a long time. I may try to find some so that I can enjoy their beauty once again. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 3:11 AM - I have them in my garden, Sara ... it got really big last summer ... had to dig it up and divide it this year ... hope it will do well ... beautiful flowers :) - Thanks for the comment :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham June 4, 2023 at 12:30 PM Love the contrast between the two haiku, Perfect for the contest. Hope you've had a lovely day Anne Lise, Good luck in the contest. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 3:05 AM - Thank you, Tom - We had a lovely weekend with a nice day at sea, although it was a bit cold - Hope you had a lovely weekend too...give my regards to Jane :) - hugs

Sotto Poet June 4, 2023 at 11:59 AM Anne-Lisse your haiku collection is a marvelous display of creativity. The quality of your imagery is exceptional, as evidenced by the poem about a white daisy pondering a question, discovering the answer, and consuming it without concern for conquest or possession. This flower thrives in its untamed state, attracting those who appreciate its fragrance. Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 3:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las :) - hugs