Haiku Versus Rhythm and Rhyme

I want verses not versus. I've got them in your poem.Love delysia XXX rajat

I can see why you directed me to this one as it is saying the same sort of thing as I was saying in mine...I can't understand why people get so worked up about haiku, or why people think it's so marvellous...a lot of it just leaves me cold, I find it rather dull and boring...the only time I truly enjoy haiku is when metaphor and imagery is used within it - ironically, the very things that aren't supposed to be used!

I think this is remarkable, a Haiku wirtten in ryhme and meter! Never seen this before -trememndous effort!!! MC

I couldn't agree more Licia, I'm no fan of hiku siju senju an all that stuff, rhythmn an rhymne keeps me happy, Great write and faved lol. Take care, Richard

Woman! Amen to this! Haiku got me blue...! Too worried about RULES! This is awesome and to my favs it goes! :) Write something new, woman!!! Come on!!! Your fans await! Hugs! Thanks or being so sweet to me! You don't now how much I appreciate it!

Hello Delysia, thank you very much for enjoying my poem. Indian Ink, it is more than it reads. And thank you for pointing out mt T W. poem. I loved and Favorited his poem. ....ps...I enjoyed the humor in these haiku the first time I read them. Could not help and read them all over again. love the way you broke the no rhyming rule in haiku. :-) ...PD

love this golden oldie, Delysia, in fact, i'm right behind you on this subject,, and yes, the form you hate, as turned out some wonderful poetry..

You will rhyme in everywhere...LOL.enjoyed this witty write.

Don't be blue. Stay true to you. Loved this witty write, Delysia. How did Deb feel about it? I know she has very specific ideas on how haiku should be written. Frankly, I think is a way cool commentary on poetic forms and how seriously some folks take them. Brian's blog gets into this. Love, Carolyn

Just came back to see this funny one from you!! I wonder what Debs will think!

It's always good to expiriment, and I have sometime. I so love writing in rhyme also. Good luck in Debbie's contest Delysia....:)

beautiful

A very cute and clever one for Debbie's contest..Best wishes for the contest Delysia...

I've been trying to spread my wings a bit too, Delysia but I too am apt to write in rhyme if left to my druthers. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, delysia

Great one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

Congratulations Delysia on your well deserved poetry being featured this wee . Love, Carol

Congrats on your featured poem this week on P.S., and good luck in this contest ..a great one to share with us all with luv..

This is sooooo awesome and Debbi will appreciate your resistance to create something outta the box for her contest's existence! Excellent work here, poet!! Gwendolen

hahaha, you still stayed in that box, but it sure was cute!!

This for me is a winner girlfreind. Nice one.

Very humorous write, A unique entry, delysia