Constance La France Poet Haiku

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Haiku - Tangerine Sky

oh sweet october
with your sunlit lovely clouds -
                       drifting up above

deep tangerine sky
was pink a moment ago - 
                       now it is bright red

shifting and swirling
cinnamon and purple view -
                       landscape kissing sky


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August 19, 2015


Poetry/Haiku/tangerine sky
Copyright Protected, ID 15-7011-95-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, October Sky, 
sponsor, Skat, 

First Place

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Skat A September 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM Broken, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Eve Roper August 31, 2015 at 5:49 PM Back to congratulate you "Bravo" Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight August 31, 2015 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your top win, Brokken. Your lovely imagery brings this visual to life. Hugs, Sandra

Anindya Mohan Tagore August 31, 2015 at 10:00 AM Wonderful expressions... Congrats on your deserving win ... Cheers , Bobby

James Inman August 31, 2015 at 7:18 AM I hope I'm sensing a smile on your face. You deserve it.

Michael Tor August 31, 2015 at 6:18 AM Congratulations nice job.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 31, 2015 at 4:44 AM Ah that's a lovely string of haikus broken! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on first place win!

Jan Allison August 31, 2015 at 1:19 AM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. August 30, 2015 at 10:27 PM BW, this was a beauty to behold. Congratulations on your top win:-)Alexis

Eve Roper August 25, 2015 at 11:34 PM Wonderful description of the imagery a 7 and good luck in the contest. hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2015 at 3:59 PM Constance, these are all three nice but that last one is SPLENDIFOUROUS!! (my own word I created. haha)

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2015 at 12:58 PM Very descriptive contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for your visit to my page..Have you seen the movie October Sky? It is a good one..Thanks for stopping by..I do like the use of color in your Haiku..Sara

Eric Boddie August 20, 2015 at 11:29 AM October sky is so special to me....October is when I began my destiny....nearly 40 years ago and it has been fun....I take it one day at a time, new obstacles are sure to come....;)

Frederic Parker August 20, 2015 at 9:53 AM An artist painting with words, I've seen what you imagined by your words in my mind while reading your poem..good luck my poetic friend..you should do well

Ravi Sathasivam August 20, 2015 at 7:56 AM Excellent. Beautiful imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Jan Allison August 20, 2015 at 5:13 AM simply stunning - good luck:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian August 20, 2015 at 12:11 AM :) Lovely imagery. Love the choice of words to describe the vivid colors. You pic was made for your poem, dear. Good luck! Hugs

James Inman August 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Very nice, BW.