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mug of coffee early fall joy at sunrise brushing all cares away in god's country not wanting to let go of dreams sweet illusions highway stretch buffet of autumn colors hint of skunk AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on April 12, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (APR 14) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on April 8, 2021

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Date: 4/9/2021 7:46:00 AM
Great haiku suite, Line. You describe lovely things, then add the skunk! Very fitting, though, because stink is what skunks do! LOL! I especially love the "buffet" line. Janice
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:41:00 PM
Yes, I know ~ my poem stinks
Date: 4/8/2021 5:32:00 PM
Maybe the sk*nk was just the white stripe down the middle of the highway stretch, or something. lol. Nice vignettes, Line. :) gw
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Date: 4/8/2021 10:26:00 PM
ok, Gershon ~ lol
Date: 4/8/2021 2:55:00 PM
Ha, that's so true in the country, you're out enjoying the scenery, then - skunk or horse manure!
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Date: 4/8/2021 10:26:00 PM
Ah ~ nature at its finest
Date: 4/8/2021 1:21:00 PM
I dislike the hint of skunk, great diary
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Date: 4/8/2021 2:42:00 PM
lol ~ it's been a while since I smelled, not saying that I miss it.
Date: 4/8/2021 7:26:00 AM
Loved every image except the last line, of course, ha ha! Great job, Line:)
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Date: 4/8/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thanks, Jo ~ lol

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