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Haiku Snow

crisp snow slides from roof crashing down in jagged piles... slippery pathway

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2012 11:25:00 PM

came back to an oldie. i'd seen it before but it's still as lovely as ever.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/19/2011 5:35:00 PM

congrats on your success in the contest..I enjoyed. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 3:16:00 PM

HI, there, Marg. How is it down under today? Congrats on your win here. Can't wait to see your animal haiku. I think I will look right now and see if you posted one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations Margaret on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2011 9:47:00 AM

and boy do I fall on those slippery patches every year! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/13/2011 1:59:00 PM

a metaphor is implied in line 3 the fallen snow appears as if it were miniture mountains..you need a new line three, almost no poetic vehicles are used in haiku except occasional alliteration..in this snap shot you have a perfect intro to a SOUND for line three...go for it! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 9:03:00 PM

This is SO adorable, those miniature mountains. what a sweet sight!!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/12/2011 7:22:00 PM

A top charter here Marg!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 7:19:00 PM

a lovely haiku... thank you for sharing,..p.d.