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Haiku Snow

crisp snow slides from roof 
crashing down in jagged piles...
slippery pathway

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Andrea Dietrich

March 3, 2012 at 11:25 PM

came back to an oldie. i'd seen it before but it's still as lovely as ever.

Barbara Gorelick

November 19, 2011 at 5:35 PM

congrats on your success in the contest..I enjoyed. BG

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2011 at 3:16 PM

HI, there, Marg. How is it down under today? Congrats on your win here. Can't wait to see your animal haiku. I think I will look right now and see if you posted one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 17, 2011 at 11:20 AM

Congratulations Margaret on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

November 15, 2011 at 9:47 AM

and boy do I fall on those slippery patches every year! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

November 13, 2011 at 1:59 PM

a metaphor is implied in line 3 the fallen snow appears as if it were miniture mountains..you need a new line three, almost no poetic vehicles are used in haiku except occasional alliteration..in this snap shot you have a perfect intro to a SOUND for line three...go for it! Light & Love