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Christmas time haiku - “tableaux d’une exposition” post-it notes on walls Long Tooth May 25, 2016 The painting here is a beautiful portrait of Mussorgsky the composer of the famous classical work 'Pictures At An Exhibition.' This haiku is a very dense multi-layered haiku perhaps unlike any you have ever seen before. Let me explain what it means to me and then please share if you think I accomplished my goals in writing it. The Christmas appellation refers not only to a season of the year but also stretches this seasonal reference in nature to include the gift giving season which, for a poet like myself, is any day that my muse offers me an idea for a haiku or a poem. Since haikus are usually images, like a painted picture, the haiku suggests that the post-it notes on my wall are frames of each picture (or different individual haiku) in my exhibition. Using the seven syllable French phrase for 'Pictures at an Exhibition, ' a very famous piece of classical music by Mussorgsky, gives the exhibition an erudite air as if my haiku were hung in the Louvre rather than my office. Vanity, vanity, all is vanity! My questions for more experienced haiku writers include: 1. Can a real haiku be intentionally dense. ie., carry emotional overtones? 2. Can a real haiku have only one real interpretation, ie., the poet's intention? 3. If a haiku has as many possible interpretations as it has readers, how can it possibly be art?

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Date: 6/8/2016 9:51:00 AM
I'm not a haiku expert at all, but I do love your poem, and I love the picture with it, and I love your explanation and thoughts with this. Well done! (Debbie Guzzi might be someone to have a conversation with, she has a deep interest in the Haiku form)
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Date: 6/2/2016 11:10:00 PM
Very inventive! As a picture is a thousand words, each haiku is an exhibition of your thoughtful imagination. Like your idea of post-it notes.
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Date: 6/2/2016 9:46:00 PM
Good information.
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Date: 5/30/2016 4:33:00 PM
Educational :-)
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Date: 5/30/2016 1:21:00 PM
I enjoyed this display and explanation of how you arrived at it.
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