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Haiku No Titles, Theme Nature Contest

after the deluge stilled cloud-shrouded land awakes. . . flood of breaking day Entered 4/15/2018 for MIck Talbot's Haiku no titles, theme NATURE Contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:17:00 PM

great imagery

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 7:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Andrea. It is wonderful to see you entered in the contest and winning. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/15/2011 9:41:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on HM for this phenomenal poetry my friend.. luv visual scope ...luv..

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/15/2011 6:10:00 AM

This is a realistic picture after the deluge,Andrea.Congratulations on your win!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/14/2011 6:19:00 PM

Fine writing Andrea. Congratulations. Love, joyce

John Freeman

Date: 11/14/2011 5:52:00 PM

A worthy Haiku Andrea. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/14/2011 3:26:00 PM

A nice written piece and congrats to you my dear sweet friend... luv Michael

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/14/2011 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 1:05:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Andrea. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/26/2011 12:16:00 AM

Words,, words.. beautiful choice of them and the theme...strikingly unique haiku, Andrea.. Congrats to you for win as well as creating such a piece.I wish this had been placed higher. huggs, gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 5:35:00 PM

Interesting work..Congrats..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/25/2011 5:11:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest andrea! "cloud-shrouded land" I love it...I would've placed this one much higher, it's one of the best (am I allowed to say that?) :-)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/24/2011 11:17:00 PM

Definitely loved reading this beauty again, Andrea! And super happy that this got into the winners :D I really liked how you employed that contrast of the flood of sunshine instead of the rains this time :) & thank you so much for your inspiring comments in mine! Heehee I actually spaced it in my title since I wasn't sure whether the metaphor would be obvious, so I left the clue in my title :D Awesome that you got it :D thank you & hugs to you :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/24/2011 10:23:00 PM

yes, yes, whoot andie.. super congrats on your greeat win! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 6:47:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your beautiful win in the contest with this unique Haiku so vividly painted in poetic words my friend..enjoy another victory with luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 2/13/2011 4:12:00 AM

A nice after rain picture you have painted here with the the ushering of a new day,Andrea--kashianth

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/4/2010 9:32:00 AM

HEY! guess what??? I think I am totally losing it! I DID enter that contest and with the poem you just commented on! wow - that really freaked me out. ok, going to soupmail you in about 20 minutes or so. wow, really, really need to exercise more and get the blood flowing to the brain LOL!! see you soon. hugs, shar xo (wonderful haiku - you are awesome!!)

Daver Austin

Date: 6/25/2010 3:31:00 PM

Yes!...that wonderful brightness after a rain. LOve, Dave

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/18/2010 12:21:00 AM

Again..Exceptional Haiku... re the stroy of that wuff wuff,I can imagine:)haha..Better not know I guess..Hahaa:)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/16/2010 9:56:00 AM

Great Haiku and beautiful sketch of words like painting the scene as per the photograph. You have made a lovely pic. of Mansoon and its effects. My best wishes for the contest. Love and best wishes..........Ravindra..... Andrea Dietrich

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/15/2010 10:15:00 PM

Great haiku and great entry. Thanks for your comments . Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2010 10:00:00 PM

Enjoyed this one Andrea... best wishes on the contest..P.D.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/15/2010 2:10:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you for your comment on 'History'. I actually thought about archeology when writing this Senryu, but of course you're right. Core actually means the inner depth of the earth. But i did not think about that really. I don't know if you heard of 'pacha mama' how the Southamerican Indios call 'Mother Earth' and I thought about that in the first place. Hope you are ok in Utah and not too warm. Her temperatures will fall slighly again by end of this week. Love, Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/15/2010 5:12:00 AM

Well penned Haiku on monsoon, Andrea! I have lived in Sri Lanka and know what monsoon means, but it can also mean flooding and destroying crops.. Wish you best of luck for the contest and tank you for your welcome comments...Have a great day...Gert