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Haiku No 16

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high summer heat warms
    stagnant waters in large lake:
      mosquitoes at night

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/13/2022 8:44:00 AM

Go out at night in countryside and you will have to dance with mosquitoes. Terrible! Great haiku

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2022 7:30:00 AM

They can sure make one head for cover. I haven’t been bitten in quite some time thankfully. A good haiku my friend. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2022 12:05:00 PM

Love your "Haiku No 16" write but hate those mosquitoes. They will eat you alive. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Mike Bayles

Date: 4/13/2022 8:44:00 PM

Victor, this haiku rings true. Good going.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/13/2022 2:02:00 PM

Where do you live victor, Florida? LOL

Judy Ball

Date: 4/9/2022 6:57:00 PM

Ah those little vampires are everywhere. A great write bringing out another sign that Summer is on it's way. God Bless, JB Soup Mail

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/7/2022 10:38:00 PM

those pests are a nuisances, Victor, but like us, they enjoy the warmer weather.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/7/2022 4:44:00 PM

vivid imagery Victor, I can hear those pesky mosquitoes!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/7/2022 7:11:00 AM

Aptly described a summer night, Victor:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/7/2022 6:53:00 AM

Perfect!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/7/2022 12:13:00 AM

Perfecto!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/6/2022 5:12:00 PM

Your brilliant writing brings the scene to life and tells a brief tale, Victor. I enjoyed this a lot. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/6/2022 1:50:00 PM

Victor, you've written a very well-crafted Haiku. It was a pleasure to read. Each phrase conjures up a different vision, and the final sentence sums it all up.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2022 12:17:00 PM

Nicely done, Victor. They say haiku should not have titles, but I have written so many, I'd never be able to find them by their numbers!!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/6/2022 5:24:00 AM

Each line paints a distinct image, Victor. The ending line says it all. Well done as always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2022 5:16:00 AM

- Great haiku, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/6/2022 4:51:00 AM

Terrible nighttime company. Maybe the lake needs to be drained. Of course, there are things that no one has control over. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara