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high summer heat warms stagnant waters in large lake: mosquitoes at night

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Date: 5/13/2022 8:44:00 AM
Go out at night in countryside and you will have to dance with mosquitoes. Terrible! Great haiku
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Date: 4/18/2022 7:30:00 AM
They can sure make one head for cover. I haven’t been bitten in quite some time thankfully. A good haiku my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/15/2022 12:05:00 PM
Love your "Haiku No 16" write but hate those mosquitoes. They will eat you alive. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
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Date: 4/13/2022 8:44:00 PM
Victor, this haiku rings true. Good going.
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Date: 4/13/2022 2:02:00 PM
Where do you live victor, Florida? LOL
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Date: 4/9/2022 6:57:00 PM
Ah those little vampires are everywhere. A great write bringing out another sign that Summer is on it's way. God Bless, JB Soup Mail
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Date: 4/7/2022 10:38:00 PM
those pests are a nuisances, Victor, but like us, they enjoy the warmer weather.
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Date: 4/7/2022 4:44:00 PM
vivid imagery Victor, I can hear those pesky mosquitoes!
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Date: 4/7/2022 7:11:00 AM
Aptly described a summer night, Victor:)
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Date: 4/7/2022 6:53:00 AM
Perfect!
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Date: 4/7/2022 12:13:00 AM
Perfecto!
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Date: 4/6/2022 5:12:00 PM
Your brilliant writing brings the scene to life and tells a brief tale, Victor. I enjoyed this a lot. :)
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Date: 4/6/2022 1:50:00 PM
Victor, you've written a very well-crafted Haiku. It was a pleasure to read. Each phrase conjures up a different vision, and the final sentence sums it all up.
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Date: 4/6/2022 12:17:00 PM
Nicely done, Victor. They say haiku should not have titles, but I have written so many, I'd never be able to find them by their numbers!!!
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Date: 4/6/2022 5:24:00 AM
Each line paints a distinct image, Victor. The ending line says it all. Well done as always.
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Date: 4/6/2022 5:16:00 AM
- Great haiku, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2022 4:51:00 AM
Terrible nighttime company. Maybe the lake needs to be drained. Of course, there are things that no one has control over. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Date: 4/6/2022 4:46:00 AM
A sure breeding ground for them Victor. Tom
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Date: 4/6/2022 3:31:00 AM
Nice controlled haiku. Delice
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Date: 4/6/2022 2:00:00 AM
Stagnant waters are the breeding place of mosquitoes ! Now with summer, we have them here in plenty ! Beautiful haiku, Victor....
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Date: 4/6/2022 1:54:00 AM
Awesome Haiku,
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