Haiku Lesson

*not a tradition haiku because it is subjective it is my judgement you are told to see the vine strangling the maple something a person would do, further you are told my my imagining that the vine is seeking revenge - so this is more Free Verse than haiku a bittersweet vine strangles the dormant maple ribbon of revenge * haiku - objective, factual with a season, with 2 parts and implied metaphor a bittersweet vine twines about the maple tree -- swollen knuckles ache I am here, I see the vine, I show you the vine, I see my hand at the same time, now you SEE the relationship, you FEEL, I don't tell you what to feel. The change occurs in where my eyes have fallen first up & out and then down to my hands