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Haiku Ju - Nature's Foes

"Haiku Ju - Nature's Foes" snake meets the mongoose two enemies in nature timely death battle fire meets with water two of the five elements death in an instant WTA-IV 5/20/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2016 11:27:00 PM

I like the second one the best. Death instantaneous for SURE!!!! Thanks for your nice comment to me on haiku. Wish I could write them better myself, but I sure feel that I know when I am reading a good one!!

Walter T. Ashe
Date: 5/22/2016 1:45:00 PM

Hi Andrea! Thank you! I enjoy learning from poets on this site and your library has a lot to learn from! Please have the best day!!! :-)

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/20/2016 7:44:00 PM

Wonderful two haiku's Walter.

Walter T. Ashe
Date: 5/21/2016 8:37:00 PM

Lenny, good day to you and I hope this finds you in good health! Thank you Sir!