Haiku Hell

Haikus with beer go well, I was told
So I sat down and I ate eighty-four
And when I got through
I’m here to tell you,
There sure was a mess on the floor

 Written by John Posey
12/22/12

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Donna Jones

October 19, 2013 at 12:57 PM

Oh that's is gross...but awesome.....:-) :-)

Holly Moore

December 27, 2012 at 3:47 AM

That's disgusting..very clever..Thanks for your comments on my Nonets..you should try one. I actually write mine backwards from 1-9 syllable count (almost like an etheree) then flip it. Works for me...Hugs, Holly

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2012 at 9:25 PM

ha..love it...pd

John Posey

December 25, 2012 at 4:31 AM

PD, those things really tore me up... See my reply to Andrea's comment below.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

December 22, 2012 at 6:13 PM

Must be like shelling peanuts at five Guys, where they hand you a bunch of peanuts while you await your burgers and fries. Love this one relating with haikus!!

John Posey

December 25, 2012 at 4:27 AM

I don't think so, sweetheart. I believe it was a malady brought on by some gastric instability. I lost a great pair of shoes in the process and they had to burn my clothes. .and they only reopened last week... and I've been banned for life.. Thanks for the comment.... Jake