Leon Enriquez Poet Haiku

Haiku Glimpses

Sand castles
Seashore artifacts;
Seagulls for company


Morning fitness run
Winding jogging track;
Pulse of adrenaline


Salty sea breeze
Coconut palms sway;
Stray voices unfurl


Flower carpet
Yellow and red hues;
Jogging track surprise


Seaside horizon
Sun and sand and mist;
Nature makes pictures


Piquant conversations
Seafront gathering;
Message in skyline

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Skat A May 24, 2015 at 12:48 AM beautiful. SK Leon Enriquez May 27, 2015 at 8:02 AM Dear Skat: Thank you. Leon

Mario De Paz February 11, 2014 at 8:47 AM These haiku glimpses contain good ideas and are expressed in short words as requested by the spirit of haiku. However I think preferable to fit the rule of syllables 5-7-5 because sounds better. Good job anyway. Leon Enriquez February 11, 2014 at 11:11 AM Dear Mario: Thanks once again for the kind feedback. Leon

Monterey Sirak February 11, 2014 at 6:26 AM You create beautiful images with your haikus. You have mastered this form, I think Leon Enriquez February 11, 2014 at 8:34 AM Dear Monterey: Thank you. For me, a haiku is a fragment of an experience felt. I can only try to share that moment . Sometimes, the haiku piece works. Still, we can only try, and try again. That's my view. To be a master in this genre is like chasing rainbows! But, thanks again for your encouragement, Monterey. All the best, Leon