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Haiku Fun

Haiku Fun the lizard sits still watching the flies; snatch! snatch! slurp! the flies are no more

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Jack Ellison

Date: 4/28/2015 5:42:00 PM

So cute my new friend... hugs, Jack xxx

Rochelle Harris
Date: 4/28/2015 11:18:00 PM

Why thank you sir! ...walking on sunshine...Rochelle

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/28/2015 12:35:00 PM

The flies are no more because they see the lizard as dangerous dianosour. Loved your fun, my lovely friend,bl

Rochelle Harris
Date: 4/28/2015 11:17:00 PM

BL that's certainly one way to look at - thanks for giving it a read ...walkin' on sunshine

Mario De Paz

Date: 4/28/2015 12:01:00 PM

perfect haiku with much insight and sounds too!

Rochelle Harris
Date: 4/28/2015 11:16:00 PM

Thank you Mario ..walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle

Eve Roper

Date: 4/23/2015 10:55:00 PM

Rochelle, under the **Post Comments** there is a **Rating** box, the *arrow* on the right hand you *click* on the arrow and a list of numbers from 1 to 7 will appear 1 as being the lowest and 7 as the highest. If you want you can leave a scoring on the persons poem as I have with yours. Blessings Eve

Rochelle Harris
Date: 4/24/2015 11:06:00 AM

Hello Eve, thanks so much. This site and all of it's fabulously talented contributors are such an inspiration to this "newbie" poet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2015 7:52:00 PM

That WAS fun!

Rochelle Harris
Date: 4/23/2015 10:22:00 PM

Andrea, this was written shortly after I spotted a lizard in one of my favorite Banana trees in my greenhouse. Thanks, I always enjoy writing about my real life experiences. Rochelle

Eve Roper

Date: 4/23/2015 3:00:00 PM

A 7 for this witty write. Blessings Eve

Rochelle Harris
Date: 4/23/2015 10:19:00 PM

Eve, forgive my lack of knowledge but I am unfamiliar with the "7". Please enlighten me... Thank you for clarifying, for reading and in advance for the 7 :) Rochelle

Jan Allison

Date: 4/23/2015 2:12:00 PM

very clever - love the imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rochelle Harris
Date: 4/23/2015 10:11:00 PM

Why thank you Jan, and thanks for stooping by! Rochelle