Haiku Frogs

croaking frogs mating
female lays spawn in springtime ~
metamorphosis




haiku contest sponsored by Mick Talbot
written 11 march 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Amazing what happens in that metamorphosis. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
George Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 3:41 AM
Love this ! From frothy eggs to tadpoles and frogs .... a real metamorphosis!
Cunningham Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:59 AM
Thank you very much Valsa. Mick Talbot was a haiku master and held many haiku contests. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Looks like I had not even seen this one yet. Congrats on your high placement, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thank you Andrea, I must admit I've got the hakiu bug. Tom
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:45 PM
Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Eve. Tom
Tripp Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations, Dear Tom. Awesome write. You and Paul and those dictionary words, lol.
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Thank you Rhoda, When I was at school a teacher said he used to read a dictionary of course I thought he was mad lol. But now I think what a great idea. Tom. P.S. When will your book be out.?
Callus Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:09 AM
We are suckers for long words, Tom...mine is aerodynamics, yours metamorphosis:) Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Indeed we are Paul, fitted in a treat. Thank you. Tom
Murray Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 8:07 AM
What a lovely big word Tom. So true. Well done.
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Thank you Jean. Tom.
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Many congrats Tom:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you very much Jan. Tom
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 4:01 AM
- An excellet 1st place in the contest ~ Congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Sunshine. Tom
Babu Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 3:49 AM
I Liked this one. Congratulations on your win Tom. Regards, Sathya
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Sathya. Tom
Barden Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tom - blessings, my friend! :-)
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 2:39 AM
Thank you very much Gregory. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Congrats, Tom! Great wording!
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Thank you very much kim. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Congrats on your top win, Tom. Well done.
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Thank you so much Line. Tom
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Clever use of the last five syllables, John, congrats! Regards, Viv
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:31 PM
Thank you Viv, couldn't believe my luck, it was just one word but spoke volumes. Tom.
Poteet Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:00 PM
I applaud your haiku and the winning placement, Tom. Great response to the prompt.
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:32 PM
Thank you very much Reason. Tom
Talbot Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 7:28 PM
That was the most difficult of all to judge, re those that got through to the third round, congratulations on your joint 1st place Tom... Mick
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Thank you very much Mick, It's a great honour. Great contest,thanks for hosting. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Hello tom it is a beautifully written Spring poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Darlene. You too. Tom
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 5:01 PM
very descriptive Tom:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Thanks very much Jan , hope you had a good day in Douglas. Tom
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 3:26 PM
- As a whole orchestra :) - Lovely haiku, Tom :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Thanks so much Sunshine, a lot of people don't like them but I think they're cute.
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 1:30 PM
nicely done tom, luck in the contest.. last time I added a title. I hope I did it correctly this time... luck in the contest..
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Thank you Eve, and you too.
One Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Loved this one, you are getting really good at them..
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 2:33 PM
I keep giving them a go S.O. I suppose I can only get better.
Williams Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 5:25 AM
Haha, I've had enough of croaking frogs in my backyard,however the circle of life must go on. Your haiku depicts that so well Tom. Good luck in the contest...Maria
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Maria, I was in Mauritius for my daughters wedding and it must have been the mating season, sounded like a jet engine lol.
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