Haiku Deep Waters

ship sinks deep waters child clutching blanket of hope dead mother waiting

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Date: 2/20/2015 7:46:00 AM

Heartfelt haiku, Rajat! I love the second line

Date: 2/14/2015 11:08:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, sad but real, Blessings dear friend and Happy Valentine's day

Date: 2/14/2015 8:49:00 AM

Rajat, your haiku is so sad and heartbreaking, it reminded me of the sink Titanic movie, you captured the emotion well and thanks for your visit ~~

Date: 2/14/2015 7:32:00 AM

Wow! Definitely a 7 Powerful and emotional.

Date: 2/14/2015 12:37:00 AM

Rajat, wonderful haiku. :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/14/2015 7:00:00 AM

WISH YOU A HAPPY SWEET VALENTINE'S DAY SKAT..ALWAYS & FOREVER--rajat

Date: 2/13/2015 10:07:00 PM

oh gosh, rhonda said the same thing as I did!!

Date: 2/13/2015 10:06:00 PM

I like this one very much. It reminded me of the Titanic story.

Date: 2/13/2015 9:25:00 PM

Oh so sad, Rajat...brings to mind the Titanic...hugs, Rhonda

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/14/2015 7:01:00 AM

WISH YOU A HAPPY AND SWEET VALENTINE'S DAY RHONDA..ALWAYS & FOREVER--rajat

Date: 2/13/2015 1:47:00 PM

deep and sad - Hugs jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/14/2015 7:02:00 AM

WISH YOU A HAPPY AND SWEET VALENTINE'S DAY JAN.ALWAYS & FOREVER--rajat