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Cacophonus crow Raucously robbing robins.. Pandemonium Pitiful petunias pray.. Salivating snail.. Duck delicacy Sweet spring surprises Doe dining delicately Nature nourishes Hungry hawk hovers Quiet quail quakes and quivers Corn cover conceals Winners and losers Natures game of survival No reprieves granted Won no. 10 spot

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Date: 10/8/2010 3:21:00 AM
Totally agree with Andrea! This sure is a wonderful display of alliteration :) Enjoyed your haiku series, Joyce :)-- Congrats! -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:27:00 PM
BEST for ALLITERATION in the whole group. Congrats on this most enjoyable little collection. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:59:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win in the Haiku contest with these tremendous expressions in Haiku form.. enjoy another victory today my friend with luv...
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:45:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:41:00 PM
congrats on your win Joyce with this great haikus
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:17:00 AM
What a cool idea for doing this contest. A great read! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:00:00 PM
JOYCE, GOOD LUCK AND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:39:00 PM
I truly look forward to reading your work, Joyce. You're quite gifted. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:17:00 PM
Ahh...excellent Joyce. You are on a roll !!! Great job!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:16:00 PM
I've been reading some haiku series today, Joyce, but didn't hear of the contest. Yours is a great entry. I especially love the last verse -- sums up the message quite nicely. Good luck! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:27:00 PM
love it, good luck in the contest
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