Haiku C

a golden curl the child's blue eyes: the camera snaps

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Lee Ramage

Date: 7/27/2012 9:52:00 PM

Could just give this one a squeeze. How lovely! Lee

Jack Horne

Date: 7/21/2012 10:39:00 AM

clever haiku - one of my favourite forms now! Congrats on all your wins : )

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/19/2012 3:09:00 PM

See the golden haired little girl, excellent haiku. Thank you for commenting on Depression

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 7/19/2012 3:00:00 AM

Golden curls are always a fascination for everyone and there falling on the sparkling blue eyes would only add more charms revealing much to explore. Beautiful write my friend and thank you for your kind appreciation of my Poem on Tibet. Thanks for your good wishes too. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/18/2012 5:16:00 PM

A fun and sweet Haiku, Debs!! Reminds me of Henry Wadsworth Longfellow's: "There was a little girl, Who had a little curl, Right in the middle of her forehead...." Stay well and keep that lovely smile!! Love, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2012 9:25:00 PM

Love this little picture you painted!

David Williams

Date: 7/17/2012 12:37:00 PM

Debbie, very visual, I like it,..David

Tammy Bowers

Date: 7/17/2012 11:13:00 AM

Lovely! Thank-you for sharing! ~Tammy~