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Haiku - Autumn

the birds are singing their silk feathers fluttering . . . wind picks up a leaf ________________________ September 10, 2018 Poetry/Haiku/autumn Copyright Protected, ID 18-1059-551-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Contest - Son of Senryu Sponsor - Brahn Bailey 10th Place
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Wood Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Constance, this is everything that a haiku should be. Beautifully written!
Doll Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Dear Heart, Congratulations on your win~ Warren.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 11:58 PM
Congratulations, Constance on your win. Autumn is indeed in the air.
Nipas Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 7:02 PM
So fresh. I can almost hear and feel everything you write about. Thank you.
Gauthier Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Lovely imagery, Dear Heart. Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:19 PM
I really like this. It's one of my favorites on the list. Congrats, dear heart.
Wanter Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 6:29 PM
You've really created an image in just 3 lines.
Warrior Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Lovely said Dear Heart...enjoyed my friend...sure to win...love & light...^WW^
Raynes Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:33 AM
They woke me this afternoon outside the shed, nice write
Kitchin Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Nice imagery, a great haiku.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 8:25 PM
So pretty, Constance!
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