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Haiku A

ripples spread from a throw pebbles fall: childish laughter

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Beauty Of Nature" contest Debbie. Sorry for the belated congratulations but much going on at this time. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:29:00 PM

Debbie, a wonderful congratulations :-) in Linda's "BEAUTY OF NATURE" contest.. have yourself a good one* xox~PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2012 6:50:00 AM

yeow, your ku fires the belly, debbie... congrats on your sparkling win!..) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:51:00 AM

Debbie congrats on your great win...romance and nature I like...David

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 3:47:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Debbie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Joseph May

Date: 8/11/2012 11:19:00 AM

congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/11/2012 11:08:00 AM

CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A CHARMING ENTRY.. LUV THE AMBIANCE OF THIS BEAUTY LUV..

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/8/2012 7:46:00 PM

Nice metaphor here in this traditional haiku form! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/5/2012 1:36:00 PM

lovely haiku, Debbie.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2012 1:35:00 PM

In passion oh yeah nature is beautiful ha ha. Wonderful haiku as always. love phyl

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/5/2012 9:17:00 AM

Wonderful haiku enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Jack Horne

Date: 8/4/2012 12:32:00 PM

love this one - I really enjoy reading and writing haiku now - thanks for helping me with the form, my friend

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/4/2012 6:32:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku, Debs! Not going to spoil the "beauty of nature", with my endless prattle.:) Best wishes, love, Mikki

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/3/2012 10:26:00 PM

CB gave me a thumbs up on my entry. Thank you for the concern, hon! I sent you soup mail. I am fretting...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 8:14:00 PM

Debs, I really like this; however, just one thing. I had difficulty in the third line. With no comma between passion and lips, it can read a different way. But if you said "lips meet in passion" that reads very well to me. That's what you meant, right?