Haiku Sb

a long parting kiss-

imprinted upon my lips

her lingering heat




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/29/2010 12:23:00 PM
Whoa! Very passionate..Enjoyed...Sara
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Date: 8/28/2010 10:10:00 PM
Hope u are feeling well Brian.. please let us know.. many poets are concerned about u.. luv..
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Date: 8/28/2010 5:19:00 PM
And about those blogs -- we really have missed them. You always enlighten us in an educational manner that I appreciate so much!
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Date: 8/28/2010 5:18:00 PM
I've read the other comments, Brian, and it can be interpreted in a romantic manner. However, I felt the passage of summer to fall. Here in Florida we have "lingering heat" well into mid to late November. And since you labeled this a haiku as opposed to a senryu, I'm thinking this is your intent. Very interesting to me how people look at the same poem and see different things. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/27/2010 7:11:00 PM
This is very beautiful. Brian, I hope you are well, have not seen your blogs lately and I am missing your inspiration.. Love Constance
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Date: 8/27/2010 6:13:00 PM
Quite romantic as well as passionate too.. luv this write from u my friend... have a happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/27/2010 8:23:00 AM
Ahhh.....makes one sigh!! Nicely done! :)
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Date: 8/27/2010 4:30:00 AM
Brian a beautiful haiku.. hope you're having a great day ~ Wilma
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