Haiku Rainbow

sunshine and showers
reflection and refraction ~
a colourful arc



Written March 8th 2018
For open hakiu contest sponsored by Mick Talbot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/17/2020 1:08:00 PM
This is delightful Tom. Love the way you integrate science and poetry! Congratulations on your win. Over Fork Over!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/17/2020 1:31:00 PM
Thank you Sam, happy you liked it. Over Fork Over. ( no one has asked what that is yet, bet they're curious though) Hope you had a nice weekend. Tom
Date: 5/17/2020 6:56:00 AM
Loving your rainbow this morning Tom Sing me a rainbow... SuZ
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Date: 5/17/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne, might sound like Lee Marvin singing wandrin star lol. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 5/17/2020 6:01:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Tom - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/17/2020 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Gregory, there is no better sight than a colourful rainbow after a shower. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 4/13/2018 3:05:00 AM
Wonderful observation. Have a sunny day. Kai
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/13/2018 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Kai, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/12/2018 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Very well done. Also thanks for your visit!..............pat
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Date: 3/12/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thank you pat, you're welcome.
Date: 3/12/2018 2:33:00 AM
There's a pot of gold at the end for sure. Congratulations Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 3:49:00 AM
Haha Jean, I've looked but never found it. Tom
Date: 3/10/2018 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/10/2018 11:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve.
Date: 3/10/2018 4:34:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/10/2018 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I have to say haiku's are facinating, to try and create a scene with so few words, I think I've got the bug.
Date: 3/10/2018 3:40:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Tom. Well done.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/10/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Line.
Date: 3/10/2018 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place Tom, I can see it stretching from horizon to horizon. Many thanks for taking part... Mick
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/10/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Mick.Thank you for hosting.
Date: 3/9/2018 6:42:00 AM
We need the whole array! Nice!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim.
Date: 3/9/2018 6:11:00 AM
Another very good haiku, you do these so well, creating vivid imagery in a few words..
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thank you S.O. , had never wrote one until I joined soup, I have been watching the masters on here, it's such a great place to learn.
Date: 3/9/2018 6:00:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Tom :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2018 6:19:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine, I love to see a a rainbow, an awesome sight. You have just given me an idea.
Date: 3/9/2018 4:23:00 AM
Such a lovely haiku Tom, I love seeing rainbows they always make me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2018 4:51:00 AM
Thanks Jan, even when I was in Ireland I never did find the crock of gold, enjoy the weekend.
Date: 3/8/2018 8:08:00 PM
sounds like a monkey's wedding to me. Sunshine and showers create beautiful colors. Likely a short-lived moment, rainbows usually are. Enjoyable haiku.
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:30:00 PM
Love your comment ,I'm laughing now, can just see them walking down the aisle.lol.
Date: 3/8/2018 7:45:00 PM
This is so lovely, Tom!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/8/2018 11:29:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 3/8/2018 5:23:00 PM
Awesome haiku, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/8/2018 11:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Line.
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