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Haiku For Raul

Liquid lasers cut moist verdant patterns into refuge for the soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/18/2009 8:15:00 PM
Love this haiku, Gerard! Each word is integral and paints a vivid, lovely picture. Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:01:00 PM
Super Haiku Gerard >> James
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Date: 10/8/2009 5:57:00 PM
Lovely poem for Raul's contest!! :) Carrie
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Date: 10/8/2009 11:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading. Marty
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Date: 10/8/2009 11:14:00 AM
Gerard, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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Date: 10/8/2009 11:05:00 AM
Interesting take on the picture. Nicely done Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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