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Haiku Beyond - Nature Only

HAIKU BEYOND ( NATURE ONLY ) Whirled stars cold night light, It is out of this world - oh, Eyes gaze o’er the chasm. ……………………………………………… ( Written for the contest of Rick Parise )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/23/2011 12:06:00 PM
Keenly observed and read, the picture of the contest, Sydney
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Date: 3/23/2011 11:47:00 AM
It does appear to be a type of chasm, Syd. Very interesting interpretation of the picture. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/23/2011 10:21:00 AM
Very nice Sydney, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 3/23/2011 10:17:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Sydney. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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