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Haiku About the Butterfly

wings flutter across my left cheek a ticklish smile

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/5/2017 8:19:00 AM

Hi Charma, What a delight haiku. I love butterflies, they're so beautiful:-) Alexis

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2017 3:56:00 PM

I think this butterfly gave you a kiss, Charma. One landed on me at the Butterfly Pavilion in Callaway Gardens and it did tickle! Hope you are doing well, dear. Hugs, Carolyn

Tim Smith

Date: 4/4/2017 9:40:00 AM

A sweet ku Charma...I took my daughter to the nature museum a few months back and there is a butterfly room with over a hundred species fluttering about. You would love it.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/3/2017 6:56:00 PM

I'm usually not a haiku lover, but I love this! I think I'll convert.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/3/2017 5:21:00 PM

Nicely written Charmaine :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/3/2017 5:01:00 PM

Lucky butterfly. :) Your haikus my sweet friend are like soft whispers on a calm spring evening, they always bring a smile. Loved this Charmaine.